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Entry Comments
fxb   flood lolz
flood lolz
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 7:57:05 PM EDT

Really wonderful water effect. Very photorealistic. I hate to nitpick, but it's so close to perfection! Adding some distortion or splashing to the water around people who are moving, and also darkening people's pants a little bit down by the water to indicate that their clothing is getting soaked. Did I mention how great this is?

fxb   truck maybe
truck maybe
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 7:51:00 PM EDT

Although coloring and artistic effects can do a great deal to improve a picture, these contests are more about image manipulation - creating a believable "fake". I really look forward to seeing your future submissions!

fxb   Different Worlds
Different Worlds
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 7:48:41 PM EDT

Plucking people from one scene to another is one of the most challenging of efforts. So much to pay attention to: placement, perspective, lighting, shadows, etc. I admire your effort, practice will perfect it. Good luck!

fxb   City Landscapes
City Landscapes
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 7:46:05 PM EDT

I'm a big fan of greenery in city scenes, it looks like a carpet of clover. I like that you paid attention to the perspective of the yellow truck lettering and the greenery. I'm sure you will perfect your techniques as you continue to enter contests. Good luck!

fxb   Big Cheese
Big Cheese
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 6:27:56 PM EDT

That's one happy mouse!

fxb   wild cargo
wild cargo
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 6:26:44 PM EDT

I'm very glad you added shadows, but the shadows should match the density and softness of the source picture for added realism. I think you did a good job cutting the elements out of the original pictures, I don't see any artifacts at all! The snake really shows how hard you worked at it. Good luck!

fxb   It's all in YOUR head!
It's all in YOUR head!
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 6:22:57 PM EDT

Aw, he just wants love. A bigger full view would have helped see the details better! A very ambitious idea, good luck.

fxb   waterfall unloaded
waterfall unloaded
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 6:14:03 PM EDT

Careful attention to masking around image elements and attention to lighting would have made this a contender! Great imagination.

fxb   Diaper Bandit
Diaper Bandit
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 6:12:41 PM EDT

I really love this - top 3 for sure! The picture caption sentence is kind of broken (english-wise)... Otherwise great job!

fxb   Coca-Cola
Coca-Cola
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 6:09:39 PM EDT

A bit rough around the edges, but otherwise it really looks like it belongs there! Good job.

fxb   Ferarri Truck
Ferarri Truck
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 6:08:25 PM EDT

Somebody likes Ferarris! Perfect perspective on the Ferarri behind the truck, great sources make all the difference! Softening the shadow under the car to match the truck and working on the lighting would have helped make the entry bellisimo!

fxb   Truck
Truck
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 6:05:53 PM EDT

Merry Christmas! A little extra attention to masking around the elements goes a long way, helps with the realism. Good luck!

fxb   Combo Truck
Combo Truck
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 6:03:44 PM EDT

A bigger full view would have been great to see the details...and it seems you added quite a few!

fxb   look outside
look outside
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 6:02:39 PM EDT

It's a frog buffet! I like this cute little guy peeking out looking for lunch! Great job adding the shadows to all your elements. Tiny things like flies are hard to cut out of thier original elements, maybe consider leaving their legs out altogether and drawing in new ones? Good luck!

fxb   Hang on
Hang on
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 5:53:18 PM EDT

Wheeeee!

fxb   Circus Truck
Circus Truck
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 5:52:31 PM EDT

Thanks for posting your sources! It really shows how much work you did. You really paid attention to perspective and shadows. I really like this entry and think it will place highly!

[Edited by User on 12/20/2008 12:42:37 AM]

fxb   hot hot hot
hot hot hot
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 5:47:08 PM EDT

Creative idea! It looks cozy in there.

fxb   Oprah's Twinkies
Oprah's Twinkies
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 5:42:35 PM EDT

Shading the boxes to match the scene would have helped them to blend a touch better, as well as adding shadows under the boxes on the left. I suggest using light and shadow on the edges of the signs to make the more "3d"? Good luck.

fxb   Fully Loaded
Fully Loaded
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 5:36:42 PM EDT

The front bumper looks as though it is scraping the street because there is no shadow to show perspective, and the red car has the opposite problem, a super sharp shadow. Just a little attention to shadows makes all the difference! Good luck!

fxb   Water leak
Water leak
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 5:30:44 PM EDT

I like the water resuce! Cool idea. I really like that you used a real water source, but as you can see, the edges can be hard to manage. Here is a really great water tutorial that will kick it up a notch next time!

fxb   Christmas Tree??
Christmas Tree??
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 5:25:36 PM EDT

Hi, welcome to Worth! My first entry had a last-minute drawn-on arm and shoulder, so don't sweat it! I hope you keep submitting, because you'll learn a lot here. You really should not put your name in your comments because the voting is supposed to be anonymous, but since this is your first entry, I guess it is okay! I look forward to seeing more of your work.

fxb   Jungle Zone
Jungle Zone
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 5:18:47 PM EDT

A larger full view would have been really great on this entry, it makes it easier to judge. I like what I see though, great imagination!

fx   Rolling Stones
Rolling Stones
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 5:13:36 PM EDT

This is amazing.

fxb   Equipped Mouse
Equipped Mouse
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 12:37:12 AM EDT

I thought this would do better! I really love it. I look forward to seeing more stuff from you!

fxb   Karate Mouse
Karate Mouse
Beeeny said 3 years ago 12/19/2008 12:34:53 AM EDT

Aw! I thought this one would place much higher. Tops in my book!