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Metal Spikes
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Implant Shades
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Krysti
said 6 years ago 10/22/2006 7:15:18 PM EDT
I love the piece above the eyebrow. I think you should have done the same with the side of the glasses. Love the rivets, but "lines" or "stitches" that come off the glasses don't look realistic, rather rand drawn as an after-thought.
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Fashion Extreme
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New Look
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cooky
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Krysti
said 6 years ago 10/22/2006 7:15:18 PM EDT
The masking around the jewelry that goes from her head to her chest is poorly masked in addition to it not looking as if it attaches... more like it fades into the skin. The flower in her hair has a lot of masking issues leaving a huge halo effect. Lastly, her earring just fades into her ear instead of attaching through or into her ear.
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zipper.jpg
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permenant watch
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Krysti
said 6 years ago 10/22/2006 7:15:17 PM EDT
The watch is not in focus and there is a lot of blurring where you've attached it to your arm. The stitches look great, but the incision doesn't look realistic. You've also left a lot of residue above the arm. Be careful with your masking as things such as this really take away from the desired results.
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Smart Jewelry
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piercing
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Metal corset
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Hott Specs
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The Retro-future Self Harming Punk Look
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Krysti
said 6 years ago 10/22/2006 7:15:17 PM EDT
Unfortunately, due to the poor resolution (due I believe to the fact you attempted to enlarge the photo) and blurriness of the photo, it isn't really possible to see what you have done. Try for high res photo-stock and stay away from blurring.
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Raver Wrap
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Krysti
said 6 years ago 10/22/2006 7:15:17 PM EDT
You have some masking issues, especially around the feet. Additionally, your rope of lights isn't consistant in size and color, definitely not giving it a photo-realistic look. I actually think the outlet looks pretty good. I think maybe taking an actual electrical cord plug and colorizing it would have helped with the actual plug.
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George
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Bowie
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Krysti
said 6 years ago 10/20/2006 4:17:26 PM EDT
First off, welcome to worth.
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50 Cent Trooper
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Krysti
said 6 years ago 10/20/2006 4:06:38 PM EDT
a litte advice being that his is your first entry. First of all, don't tell us that your entry is crappy, you are pushing your opinion into our heads... leading the witness so to speak. Secondly, if you think it is crappy, save your 10 credits or someone else's that may sponsor you and don't enter. Improve upon it and wait until another contest that it fits comes along. thirdly, as far as first entries go, it isn't all that bad.
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BADuma
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Paul 'Sky'Walker
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Yoda Griffin
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Darth Willis
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New Jim Carey as OB1 figurine! Rare!
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Potter Wars
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Krysti
said 6 years ago 10/20/2006 4:06:37 PM EDT
Unfortunately, this image is to small to really see well. I can tell that Hermione's head is too large for her body, but that's about it.
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Darth manson
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Krysti
said 6 years ago 10/20/2006 4:06:37 PM EDT
There's an outline of white that you missed when masking. Good masking skills are essential in an advanced contest. In addition, there is a halo around his head where I assume you were trying to fix his hair. There is a great tutorial on fur/hair in the tutorials section here on the site.
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Sean Skywalker
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