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logo   distinct-logo
distinct-logo
NathanVonMe said 7 years ago 4/13/2005 4:37:02 PM EDT

a cool font but it could use some more to it you know?

logo   distinct 2
distinct 2
NathanVonMe said 7 years ago 4/13/2005 4:34:59 PM EDT

not a big fan of the logo.

logo   distinct logo
distinct logo
NathanVonMe said 7 years ago 4/13/2005 4:34:59 PM EDT

a little bit more creativity would have helped - but not bad.

logo   Squares and Dot
Squares and Dot
NathanVonMe said 7 years ago 4/13/2005 4:34:58 PM EDT

i like this. the font is simple, but very effective. very nice.

text   Deadline
Deadline
NathanVonMe said 7 years ago 4/11/2005 5:42:06 PM EDT

On 4/11/2005 4:41:37 PM, Squirrelqueenofdoom said:

I don't understand the meaning of the bell, but the piece was very meaningful and well written.

the bell sounds at the time of worship. it's actually just to incrase the irony, but thats what it means to the character.

text   Deadline
Deadline
NathanVonMe said 7 years ago 4/10/2005 7:41:35 PM EDT

On 4/10/2005 6:45:34 PM, ElMexicanFork said:

THIS IS A PIECE OF CRAP!!!
I truly truly, cannot think of why anyone would write such a drab and boring story as this!nate
don't worry, I have -130 karma, :-)

Haha, thx cale. at least i can always get some support from you huh.

text   The Deaths in my Life
The Deaths in my Life
NathanVonMe said 7 years ago 4/10/2005 12:30:18 AM EDT

sentimental and all, but it doesn't really sound like a story.

text   Time Is Money
Time Is Money
NathanVonMe said 7 years ago 4/10/2005 12:30:18 AM EDT

love the lifeclock idea.

text   Trouble In Tijuana
Trouble In Tijuana
NathanVonMe said 7 years ago 4/10/2005 12:30:16 AM EDT

unique ending...not sure if i liked it or not. overall nice job.

text   Minutemen
Minutemen
NathanVonMe said 7 years ago 4/10/2005 12:30:16 AM EDT

I like the wording, very subtle but nice. I dont think its as tense and suspenseful as you wanted it, but overall very nice job.