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choose lifestyle
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Support PC Repair Jobs
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Stronger PC
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Red Riding Hood
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FlippyCalendar
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SANTAR
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Claus
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Desert night
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Clear Day
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Star Player
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iEgypt
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Quick Change
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Lion man
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Qofcheez
said 2 months ago 12/6/2011 8:11:07 AM EDT
I know it's nitpicky, but the scratches on the chest lack any depth, and seem instead to float above the image. Some inner shading would help solidify them, along with a very slight highlight on the skin edges to indicate a slight raise. Otherwise a nice image with a good dose of feeling behind it
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the magnificent
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Qofcheez
said 2 months ago 12/6/2011 8:08:43 AM EDT
A nice overall great looking image but it's hard to overlook the odd length of her neck, and the rather unfinished look for the right leg. It's a shame the details of the flesh don't match the more careful details of the clothing and accessories. I think more time devoted to adding the careful precision present in those parts to the hair and some other areas would really make this stand out more prominently.
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Wild SeaHorse
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Steampunk Experiment
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Qofcheez
said 2 months ago 12/3/2011 11:39:22 PM EDT
Ambitious project, but the woman seems to not quite fit into the image. She is so differently lit from the rest of the image, and doesn't quite fit in with the motif. Had it just been the snail I think it would have been more effective.
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Turtle Chaos
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Qofcheez
said 2 months ago 12/3/2011 11:37:53 PM EDT
Superb lighting on this one, I had expected it to take first, if not top three. The lighting is complex but nicely seamless.
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Time for a nap
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Qofcheez
said 2 months ago 12/3/2011 11:35:55 PM EDT
Shame this wasn't doing better, it's a great comp, but the overblown highlights on the dog don't match the general lighting of the background. Rather then try to remove those highlights, you could always add some overblown whites into the background to indicate the strong light source.
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Listen buddy....
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Qofcheez
said 2 months ago 12/3/2011 11:33:27 PM EDT
Great idea, find I find the image hard to believe. The ant doesn't see to be in the sight of the cat, where it's looking, and the colors could be more suited to the evident brown tint in the cat image, both in terms of shadows, and a brightening of the ant and addition of a little color to reflect the dark areas on the cat, like the tail, where it's not truly black, but appears more brown with light delicate highlights, and more softness rather than the harsher sharpening on the ant.
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Escape from Madagascar
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The head in clouds
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Chameleon Attack
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EgyptGiant
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Water for elephants.
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Skull
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Qofcheez
said 3 months ago 11/19/2011 9:09:12 AM EDT
I really liked this, thought it would do better. The bold lines and contrasting delicate shading of the skull makes for a nice image, though the 'tendrils' seem to require more work/thought behind them as they seem hastily drawn in comparison to the more careful work on the skull.
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