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the stone
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said 2 years ago 8/14/2010 8:33:14 AM EDT
It's a little difficult to asses just how well done this is without a source. It looks very seamless, but was the lighting added to the tractor or was it part of the initial photograph? Either way it looks very good, and the added tires are very convincingly inserted
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Book
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Qofcheez
said 2 years ago 8/11/2010 9:35:47 AM EDT
Wow~! Fantastic idea and it must have been a lot of work! It seems a little like magnetic repulsion though in that the letters are leaving the book by radiating outwards instead of levitating upwards
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Off Key
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Eliminating Competition
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Qofcheez
said 2 years ago 8/11/2010 9:33:18 AM EDT
IN looking at the image, the shadows suggest that the woman on the right is closer to the wall. However, she is larger then the woman on the left, who now appears to be further behind, which is not possible. TO correct this, you would want to enlarge the woman on the left so that she appears further in front, while keeping the light shadow which also suggests her being further in front
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Something wrong in my Bathroom
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Qofcheez
said 2 years ago 8/11/2010 9:29:22 AM EDT
If all the objects were going directly upwards it might come across better as a levitation as opposed to the current configuration that seems a little more like an explosion, as some objects are going up and outwards
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Airbed
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Qofcheez
said 2 years ago 8/11/2010 9:27:52 AM EDT
Oh :( If only the mirror reflected the levitation :(
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Zero Gravity
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Floating Squirrel
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Qofcheez
said 2 years ago 8/11/2010 9:23:24 AM EDT
heh at first I thought this was just a photo of a squirrel jumping :P You get top marks for believability, though it does suggest jumping rather the levitating. Perhaps higher off the ground?
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Bear Affair Boutique
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Cinematic Effect
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Qofcheez
said 2 years ago 8/11/2010 9:15:07 AM EDT
Each of your changes would be great for altering the look of a chop through adding atmosphere and/or meaning, but as a tip, it would also be good to first do a manipulation before making these type of changes, as fx entries are more focused on what can be done with more then one source, whereas the photography section is more appropriate to the type of alterations you've done. However don't despair! You've got the right idea! Changes like this are necessary to bring an image that extra punch needed after you've done your manipulating!
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Breaking Out!
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ninja bear
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Qofcheez
said 2 years ago 8/11/2010 9:05:48 AM EDT
Looks good, the black and white goes nicely with the color in the background. Perhaps more work on the costume would add even more to it. The added worth logo however seems unnecessary
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Cookie Jar Bear
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Coke Addict
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Oasis
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Creative Spark
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NewLife
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Taste Of Love
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Serenade of Solitude
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Qofcheez
said 2 years ago 8/10/2010 5:07:58 PM EDT
A nice, if a little polarized interpretation in that the opposite moods seem a little clashing. In terms of a composition, it's nice but you may want to consider less blue in the face of the upper figure
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Dream Music
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New York Street
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Qofcheez
said 2 years ago 8/10/2010 10:17:09 AM EDT
The selective desaturation is great in this! It adds a really interesting level to the piece - and ideas like this shoud get you far. A teeny bit more color in the crab though would help it stand out more instead of the taxis seeming like the subject
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Giant Mud Crab
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Qofcheez
said 2 years ago 8/10/2010 10:14:18 AM EDT
Nic esimple composition. THe difficulty in this one is the awkward bright lighting on the crab. In trying to match that you would need an even more brightly lit scene with intense shadows as it is easier to increase contrast then it is to decrease the brilliant highlighted areas on the crab (though consider playing with image - adjustment - highlight/shadow to see the narrow exteny of what is possible)
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King Crab
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Qofcheez
said 2 years ago 8/10/2010 10:01:52 AM EDT
It's a great idea to follow tutorials to learn, keep on going with it! There are some great ones on this site http://comm.worth1000.com/discussions/60372/tutorial-list (the second page has them listed according to category, like beginners)
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King Krab
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