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logo   creative juice
creative juice
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/12/2009 4:08:07 PM EDT

The name seems small and overwhelmed by the image. The style and presentation of the lettering also doesnt seem to fit with the graphical element.

logo   Burton/Wolf Logo
Burton/Wolf Logo
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/12/2009 4:07:15 PM EDT

This could be animated nicely, but how would it work in off-screen applications?

logo   Burton/Wolfe Entertainment Logo2
Burton/Wolfe Entertainment Logo2
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/12/2009 4:05:04 PM EDT

Too many type changes. Top and bottom sections seem unrelated.

logo   logo Burton
logo Burton
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/12/2009 4:02:56 PM EDT

It seems odd to have one of the two names displayed in such a large and dominant manner. I don't recall seeing anything in the brief to suggest it was not an equal partnership. The image is nice tho, using the wolf and the o for the moon.

logo   3
3
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/12/2009 4:01:10 PM EDT

What do the hexagons represent?

logo   Burton/Wolf Entertainment Logo
Burton/Wolf Entertainment Logo
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/12/2009 3:56:35 PM EDT

I think youre right that simpler is better, but I think you left simple territory a few elements back. There is so much going on here, the eye cannot focus on any one thing and there is also no cohesion or flow to aid the eye thru all the disparate images. Removing as few as one or two elements could help a lot.

illo   Viola, Violin
Viola, Violin
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/12/2009 5:00:45 AM EDT

No image showing for me.

logo   heart
heart
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/10/2009 4:25:31 PM EDT

Yeah, like I said such a commonly used phrase I think most people prbly don't think of it as overtly religious really, just a consideration. congratulations on the silver.

fx   Southwest Snacks
Southwest Snacks
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/10/2009 12:15:09 AM EDT

Those pretzels are hilarious.

logo   Atlas Media Logo
Atlas Media Logo
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:53:34 PM EDT

Image is very nice, font is a little boring and could feel more connected to image.

logo   altas
altas
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:52:23 PM EDT

I'm undecided on the lettering/placement but its a neat image.

logo   Atlas
Atlas
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:49:26 PM EDT

Fun use of atlas, but I'm not convinced it would play well in smaller applications.

logo   Honest care
Honest care
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:46:29 PM EDT

Could use a little polishing up, the shadows are more a distraction than worthwhile addition, the purple lettering looks a little squashed, a couple other minor things but it has nice ideas and the best tag-line in my opinion.

logo   heart
heart
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:43:06 PM EDT

Nice colors, I'm not certain if "heart and soul" being a fairly common phrase would count as anything religious being used, which the client asked be avoided.

logo   truecare
truecare
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:37:46 PM EDT

I really love this image, the colors, even the fonts are appropriate and lettering well placed. The only thing I don't love is the catch phrase, I can't decide if I like the repetition of the company name or find it, well, repetitive.

logo   True Care
True Care
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:33:09 PM EDT

It is usually advisable to avoid using the caduceus in logos for medical related companies as it is not actually a valid medical symbol (it is often confused for the rod of asclepius) and most companies are avoiding this miss-used symbol these days.

logo   true care - shinjan
true care - shinjan
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:31:04 PM EDT

It is usually advisable to avoid using the caduceus in logos for medical related companies as it is not actually a valid medical symbol (it is often confused for the rod of asclepius) and most companies are avoiding this miss-used symbol these days.

logo   Piggy vacations
Piggy vacations
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:24:16 PM EDT

Haha, excellent pig.

logo   Piggy
Piggy
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:23:20 PM EDT

I'm confused by the large red Z both in the name and on the pig's head. If that is a foreign (or unfamiliar) version of the registered mark I'm not certain it belongs on his forehead.

logo   Cofeeby.com
Cofeeby.com
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:18:00 PM EDT

When replacing the e's rotate the bean 180 degrees and it will actually look like an e.

logo   Coffeeby
Coffeeby
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:17:09 PM EDT

Name could be a little larger relative to the cup, or perhaps on it. As it is name is overwhelmed by large, mostly blank space image.

logo   coffeeby.com
coffeeby.com
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:15:06 PM EDT

I am not certain what the O is supposed to be.

logo   beans
beans
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:13:46 PM EDT

That is the right way to use a coffee bean as a letter.

logo   coffeeby.com
coffeeby.com
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:12:57 PM EDT

I think i like it better when the c is the same color as ffeeby. You lose the direct look of it being a cup handle but it preserves the legibility of the name.

logo   c
c
Rhinerium said 3 years ago 10/9/2009 11:11:43 PM EDT

Nice simple yet attractive image. The font just doesn't do it for me, the o looks like an a.