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Building 11
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Escalators
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Through
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Down the Road
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devilgas
said 7 years ago 4/4/2005 10:45:57 AM EDT
the vertical throughout trees are killing the radiality you have accomplished with the tyre tracks & electrictiy cables .
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into the center of the past
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Planar Perfection
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said 7 years ago 4/4/2005 10:45:57 AM EDT
blad, planar, bokeh. whatever. what you need to ask yourself is "do my subjects radiate from the centre of the photo?"
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Grand Wheel
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Circular Sculpture
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said 7 years ago 4/4/2005 10:45:57 AM EDT
i would really have liked to have seen this from a straight on angle rather than to the left of the tower as shot. radial type images are usually helped along with a good smattering of symmetry which this shot doesn't quite achieve.
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World Fountain
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Road Block
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The Mask
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Missouri Capitol Rotunda
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Final Fair
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Umbrella
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eggs
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devilgas
said 7 years ago 4/4/2005 9:59:11 AM EDT
welcome to worth! first off, need to get your full view down to about 200k in size. those on dialup won't thank you for the huge image ;-)
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Reflection
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devilgas
said 7 years ago 4/4/2005 9:59:11 AM EDT
normally i hate seeing photos that use CD's as for me they're just too cliche, however, your use of the CD here is inventive. i'd have perhaps preferred to have not seen the non reflective inner spindle but that would've been harder to pull off. good choice of mono....if nothing else, it avoids me looking at yet another cd created rainbow ;-)
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Egg´s eclipse
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Bug eggs
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devilgas
said 7 years ago 4/4/2005 9:59:11 AM EDT
you need to lose the toys. because they are out of focus, they do nothing for the shot at all and just make it appear clumsy. you'd be much better concentrating on the 2 mottled eggs and putting them into a -ve space or other complimentary environment.
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Hanging Basket
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the guard
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Abstract in Black and White
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said 7 years ago 4/4/2005 7:45:48 AM EDT
i'm kinda getting a halfway house with this. i either want to see a lot more contrast or, preferably, a lot less to give that nice subtle bleached look. as it stands, i'm not getting either and get the feeling of being cheated if that makes any sense.
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Shed Door
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Cramming for Finals
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said 7 years ago 4/4/2005 7:45:48 AM EDT
i can't help but feel that this is a hastily thrown together shot. i'm sure you'll agree that when compared to a number of other entries it doesn't show an abundance of creativity.
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Rusty
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Old Church Roof Lines
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devilgas
said 7 years ago 4/4/2005 7:45:48 AM EDT
for this type of shot i want to see perfect symmetry. that means getting the central line vertical and all diagonals entering / exitting on the same horizontal level. the colours / duotone (?) work well although the image looks a little soft.
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