H4H: Horror short story

H4H: Horror short story

orion1977 vs. Evelyn7 vs. RachwitchD3 vs. Koosricardo
Contest ended 5 years ago 2/5/2007 12:00:00 AM EDT

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  • Cost: 10 credits
  • Jackpot: 10 credits

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First Place
# 1
By RachwitchD3 (Score: 6.493)
5

Once more the sun rises behind Corcovado. Under the feet of the Christ the city wakes up; everything indicates a lovely day in Rio de Janeiro. As people get out for work and the cars start filling the streets Sarah wakes up. The noisy city woke her up. She was laid on the floor and even though it was morning already the room was very dark. The ground around her head was wet and she felt dizzy. Sarah opened her eyes slowly and took a look around; she knew that place very well, her living room. As she examined her surroundings she saw a broken bottle of vodka very next to her. She slowly got on her knees and breathed deeply; she put her face on her hands and asked herself:

“What happened?” she whispered.

“Bom dia*, Sarah.” Said a female voice.

Sarah looked at the voice’s direction and recognized her friend.

“Maria, what are you doing here?” She asked.

“Taking care of you!” Maria said softly.

“What’s going on?” Sarah said in a faint voice.

“Can you see the broken bottle?” Maria said, “Look more carefully…” She said. As Sarah stared at the liquid she could see small red spots among it; as her eyes ran through the red spots she could see that they became more and more dense until they formed lake next to her, next to the place her head was laid.

“Check you head, Sarah.” Said Maria coldly; she obeyed and touched the back of her head, she felt her hair dipped in a liquid. As she brought her hands to her eyes and saw, her face turned from a confused to a frightened expression.

“Maria, why am I hurt? Why am I covered in blood?” She said crying.

“Don’t worry, my friend. This blood is not yours.” Maria smiled evilly.

“Whose is it, than?” She replied.

“Your Boyfriend’s,” Maria replied, “I’ve hit him with the bottle and he fell over you. His blood spilled all around!” She laughed.

“You are crazy!” Sarah said crying.

“I thought you wanted to ‘take care’ of him! Don’t you remember? You told me he was a pain in your life!” She said.

Sarah took a piece of the broken glass in her hand and got up with great difficulty.

“Stay away from me!” She said.
“Sarah, I thought we were friends! I’ve done that for you!” Maria said giggling.

“You are sick! You killed my boyfriend!” Sarah drove towards Maria swinging the piece of bottle on her hand, but she was stopped by a knife on her belly.

“I’ve done it all for you!” Maria said calmly, “I’ve done it for us! He was keeping you away from me, he was keeping me away from my best friend! It was not fair; I needed you!” Maria held Sarah’s body and her clothes were soon crimson.

“I’ve done it for us, Sarah, I’ve done it for us…” She repeated.


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Bom dia= good morning.

Word count: 494
 
2
By orion1977 (Score: 6.254)
5

I woke up a bit late that morning. I was feeling lazy, more than I'm used to.
- Wake up cariño - Maria was gently calling me, in the same gantle way she called me every morning - Time to go to work.
- I'll not go today.
- You must. Don't be late.
- Will you miss me?
- Allways.

I kissed her, like I allways used to kiss her, and rushed to the Airport, where I'm an Handling employee.
I arrived only 10 minutes late and the check-in was already started. The queue at my desk wasn't less than huge.
- Bom dia, I mean, good morning.
- Good morning. Ticket and ID, please.
- Here.
- Window or aisle?
- Window, if you don't mind.
- Do you bring any hand luggage?
- Just my purse and some tulips I bought outside.
- Ok. Seat 23A, Gate 17 at 10 o' clock. Have a good flight.
- Thank you. Good day.

And so on...
And so on...
And so on... a complete dejà vu over a dejà vu... and I couldn't stop thinking about Maria. I was feeling something strange. There was something wrong and I didn't know what.
The time was gonog on and my worry was growing. More and more.

At last, the shift was over. I think I never drove so madly to arrive home, like I did that day.

- Maria?... Maria? - no one awnserd. Where in Earth could she be? - Maria?...

There was something bery strange. The bed was undone. Everything was out of it's place... Maria used to be a cleaning freak...

- MARIA?! Where are you cariño?
- Here.
- Where?
- Here, cariño, just turn around.
- What do you mean?! Here it's only the...

The mirror... the large and gaudy mirror. The only thing my in-laws gave to us... as a wedding gift.

- Whoa, what thhe?! Maria?! - I could see her in the mirror, sitting in bed, but the actual bed was empty - What's happening here?
- You should know.
- (I couldn't say a word)
- So quiet - there was an ironic tone on her voice - Scared?
- How? Why? Where are you? You can't be beyond the mirror. You just cant.
- I'm not here as you should know. Need an hint?

Six or seven huge cockroaches were wondering around my bed. I was ready to jam them below my shoes but I suddenly couldn't. Maria... I was finaly understanding... remembering... that booze night... the discussion... the agression... the 7 inch knife... behind the mirror... Maria... under the bed...

A lonely tear rolled down my face.
The moment after I was pursuing that damned roaches... one by one.

Word count: 425