H2H: Scene from a Horror Novel

H2H: Scene from a Horror Novel

Suziecuchon vs. V1ctorya
Contest ended 5 years ago 2/1/2007 12:00:00 AM EDT

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  • Cost: 10 credits
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A sliver of moonlight made its way through the cloudy sky and fell through the open window onto the sleeping form of a child. As a gentle breeze rustled the curtains, she stirred slightly. The clouds covered the moon once more and the only illumination was from the night light plugged in next to the closet door. With a flicker and sharp crackle, the light died. The child sighed.

The moon fought the clouds and sent a shaft of silver liquid light into the girl’s room, just in time to see a shadow creep through the window and to the bedside. The shadow slipped an appendage under the girl’s pillow feeling for its bounty- a fresh, nine-year-old tooth. A more prized possession there was not in his world.

The girl stirred and rolled on to her back. Her mouth opened slightly, and the shadow forced part of itself in. Slowly and gently it wrapped itself around each of her ivory treasures, until they were secure. Then, with a quick movement it yanked-

The girl woke up screaming as blood poured from her mouth. The shadow fled through the open window, teeth firmly held in its being. Blood began to pool and gag the child as she fought to make her way to the door, but the pain was overwhelming. In the shadow’s pulling, he had displaced her jaw which, had there been light to view it, hung disgustingly askew on her face. The wrenching of the jaw, combined with the copious amounts of blood, garbled her screams as she collapsed on the floor writhing in pain. Shock set in before she could reach the doorknob and she passed out. The blood pooled around her as her parents slept on, three doors down and to the right, just past the bathroom.

Word count: 300
 
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By Suziecuchon (Score: 6.134)
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Her long raven hair and violet eyes were hard to
ignore. All eyes were on Isabelle as she
walked into the room. Isabelle had a hunger, and the
intensity of her hunger overwhelmed her, for it had
been too long. Her body ached for the taste of blood.
Her mouth watered at the thought of the sweet taste,
as it touched her lips and fed her soul.

She had been alone for a long time, and she was tired of exploring
this world by herself. Her eyes met with the young man in
the corner, and she knew he was the one. His body was
strong, his soul stronger. As Isabelle lead him into
the shadows, he had no idea his life would change.
After tonight, he would love this beautiful woman for
all eternity. He was a good man, and would become her
protector, her lover, and her friend. As she turned
to face him and their eyes met, he knew this too.

Gently she brushed her lips against his neck and her
hunger roared at its fullest intensity. She could no
longer resist! She sunk her teeth in deeply and began
to feed. His soul became her soul and his blood filled
her body, and as this happened she had to force herself
to stop in order to not kill him. She needed this man. She
composed herself, and licked the blood from her lips,
and then from his neck. He looked at her and said,
"What next my love?" Isabelle took his hand, and with a
wicked smile she replied, "You have no idea!"

Word count: 267