H2HT4R1: Meggie vs mennufer - Bugs: Tarantula

H2HT4R1: Meggie vs mennufer - Bugs: Tarantula

Meggie vs. mennufer
Contest ended 4 years ago 6/15/2007 12:00:00 AM EDT

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First Place
# 1
By Meggie (Score: 7.523)
12

They sing to me.

Only I can hear it, this song of passion, of longing, of hunger. Only I bear witness to this haunting melody… I alone was chosen. Once long ago, on a day much like this, I interrupted the song long enough to ask them why. They stared at me, then one came close and stroked my cheek as it whispered, “Because, my dear child, you alone listen.” And the song started once more.

I’m not afraid. Most of you would be, I know. Most of you would refuse to listen, perhaps convince yourselves it was a dream, but not me. I embrace the song, revel in it… don’t you see, I heed the lure of the song because they need me… they need me. Nobody has ever needed me this way, so desperately, so… hungrily.

Now the song grows louder. The time is drawing closer where I must do as the song commands. Hundreds of voices raised in terrible beauty, and I am helpless against it.

I am abruptly drawn out of my reverie. An old lady wearing a red dress stands at the front of the room and smiles around at the sea of people. “Let the speed dating begin!” She rings a little bell, and I sit and face my first speed date, a bitter looking brunette who smells of cigarette smoke and cats. We introduce ourselves and talk about random things, and two minutes later the bell rings frantically and I stand to make my way to the next table, the next woman. And then I meet her.

“Hi, I’m Robin,” she says, holding out a slender white hand. I take her hand and at the contact, I feel as though I’ve known her my whole life. “Hello Robin, I’m Tony.” And then she asks the question.

“What do you like to do in your spare time?”

I look her in the eyes. “I breed tarantulas.” And for the first time this evening, I see a smile at this announcement. “Oh, Tony, I love tarantulas. I have several myself!” But the two minutes with Robin is gone in an instant, and I am forced to stand, to move to the next table. But my gaze still comes back to rest on Robin, and hers on me, through the rest of the evening.

The speed dating comes to a close an hour later, with the bell once again ringing cheerily throughout the room. “Okay, all you handsome men! You met every one of these lovely ladies, and now it’s time to mingle and find the woman who is perfect for you!” She smiles happily. My eyes meet Robin’s. I want to go to her. She wants it too. But then we both give each other a bittersweet smile and turn away. I scan the crowd, and my eyes land on Shirley, the bitter cat lady. I walk to her. “Hi, Shirley, I was hoping we could talk more?” I smile at her, and I can tell she’s surprised, that she expected no one to come up to her. “Um, sure, okay,” she replies, and gives me a nervous smile.

We walk to the bar, and I order her a drink, then another, then another. She’s giggling now, almost pretty with a flush on her cheeks, telling me about her many cats, her job as a file room secretary. I respond at all the right places, laugh at the right times, and pretty soon I know she’s mine.

“Maybe we should get out of here,” I say, gesturing to the crowded room. She giggles again, “Maybe we could… go back to my place?”

I grin. “I have a better idea. How about we go to mine, so we’re not interrupted by curious onlookers?” I despise cats. But when she looks at me, I wink, and she giggles once more. “That sounds perfect.”

At the door we meet Robin and her date, and he holds the door open for the rest of us, then looks at me curiously. “What are you humming? I could swear Robin was just humming that same song.” I laugh and wind my arm around Shirley, but Robin answers. “It’s just a song I’ve had in my head for ages.” I look at her in sudden realization. “Me too.”

Then she’s gone, off with her date, and I’m alone with Shirley. She looks up at me. “Are we still going to your apartment?”

I smile down at her with affection. “Oh, yes, we are.” The song now pounding through my head, I guide her to my home.

It’s them, you see. The tarantulas are singing. And I know Robin hears it too. But I can’t think of her now. Right now I must think about Shirley.

After all, it’s feeding time.

Word count: 798
 
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By mennufer (Score: 7.14)
11

"Here are the casualty reports, sir." Lieutenant Skitter dropped the pages on a rock and winced at the fresh wound on the colonel's tail. "That doesn't look good, sir. I'll get a medic." He turned to scamper off to the hospital burrow, but stopped at a shake of his superior's head.

"It's fine, lieutenant," Colonel Clawfoot said, scratching at his injury. "Damn spider only scraped off a few scales. The medics have more critical injuries to attend to." He flipped through the latest figures and sighed.

"We took the nest, sir, but it was too late. The tarantulas had already moved the egg sac to another location. However, two of our corporals captured one of their officers. Captain Green is interrogating him as we speak."

The colonel nodded. "Good. I'll put their names in for commendation. Let's hope they live long enough to enjoy it."

*****

Captain Green tapped his claws on the dirt floor of the cell as he reread the report of the capture of the enemy soldier. Corporals Hunter and Keel had stumbled upon the spider in a perimeter sweep after the platoon had captured the nest. The spider was as surprised by the encounter as the lizards were, but was slower to recover. Hunter and Keel grabbed the spider by the pedipalps and flipped him over to bind his legs. The capture was simple and unplanned, but the corporals' quick thinking and teamwork saved their own lives and probably hundreds more with the information that could be squeezed from the high-ranking arachnid.

Green set down the report and circled the tarantula, inspecting the bonds that held him in place. He was on his back, his legs gathered together in a series of knots designed to tighten should the spider struggle. Green paused at the spider's right side, noting the insignia on his abdomen – the tarantula was equivalent to a colonel. He smiled at this pleasant revelation and continued his examination, stopping when he neared the spider's head. The spider hissed and snatched at the lizard with his fangs; Green watched the flailing chelicerae and chuckled.

"Now, Colonel – we don't want you wasting your strength. This is going to take a while." Green smiled and crawled up onto a stone placed specially so that the prisoner would have to strain to look at him. "I have a great deal of questions. You probably won't want to answer any of them, but I assure you it will be better for you to answer as many as you can. First question – what is your name?"

The tarantula stared silently at Captain Green.

"Not a very imaginative question, I'll admit, but its importance is undeniable. Well? I see. We'll come back to that one. Next question – where is your main nest?"

The tarantula laughed, "You really think I'm going to tell you that?"

Shrugging, Green replied, "Honestly? I have no idea what you will and will not tell me until I have finished the interrogation. Let's go with an easy one. Would you like anything to eat? I have nothing to gain by poisoning you, and I'm sure you want to stay alive as long as possible to try all avenues of escape."

"Am I that transparent?" He paused, then sighed. "Fine. I'd like a nice juicy lizard – still kicking, please."

Green motioned to one of the guards. The guard left the chamber for a minute, then came back bearing three dried crickets. Green speared one of the crickets and offered it to the spider. "Sorry, chap – army rations."

*****

"Last question – where is your medical unit located?"

The tarantula spat a half-eaten cricket head at Green's feet.

"I see. Let's go back to the beginning. Lieutenant?"

The guard stepped forward and released one of the spider's rear legs. He let it thrash for a moment before tying it to a separate vine. He pulled on the line until the leg was fully extended, then stopped.

"What is your name?"

The spider remained silent.

"Lieutenant, if you please."

The line tightened, then slackened with a sizable crack. The prisoner shrieked in agony, writhing fruitlessly to escape the pain.

"Your name, please."

The spider steeled himself and glared at his captor.

*****

"Lieutenant, bring it in." Green peered at the spider. "Last week, we took two of your nests. One nest was empty, but the other- well, look." He pointed at the white mass brought in by the guards. Inside, the tarantula saw thousands of tiny spiders, each a spitting image of himself. Green struck a flint against the wall and lit a bundle of dried leaves. The prisoner watched in horror as the lizard brought the flame closer to the precious egg sac.

"Your name, please."

Word count: 783