Bonus: Poetry - Quatrain

Bonus: Poetry - Quatrain

Quatrain
Contest ended 4 years ago 7/29/2007 12:00:00 AM EDT

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  • Jackpot: 100 credits

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First Place
# 1
By whazzat (Score: 6.738)
3

As simple as it is to come
To concrete resolution
It’s typical that to succumb
Will hamper execution.

I try to do the thing that’s right
With every good intention
But often times I fail in spite
Of efforts toward abstention.

I set out on an even line
Eyes forward, one direction
And then as if it’s by design
I’ll reach an intersection.

I tell myself I shouldn’t turn
I shouldn’t even glance
I listen, yet, I do not learn
I halt in my advance.

Familiar is that path apart
I’ve travelled it before
As well-worn as it is, I start
To want it more and more.

The hardest step is not the first
It’s just what I regret
Turning back, well, THAT’S the worst
And hardest to forget.

In wishes I am worthy, wise
In theory I’m mature
In practice, though, it’s no surprise
Resolve is not a cure.

Word count: 150
 
Second Place
# 2
By bevissimo (Score: 6.728)
3

Today I'll keep the candle lit
And memorize the time of it.
Then later I will write it down,
Remembering each sight and sound.

Of stolen time with my fair love
As we, together, hand in glove
Will roll together and entwine,
My heart with his, and his with mine.

I know I am committing sin
By stepping even further in;
But to recapture his sweet face
So close to mine, in our embrace;

To feel his hands caress my flesh
As we, our bodies do enmesh.
I hunger for the passion bold,
As much as for those feelings old.

And then I'll have to let him go,
Back to a life I do not know.
Uncertain if I'll ever see
My love again. When will it be?

Word count: 128
 
6

While working in my office nook,
The stable world around me shook.
From outside, a noise so loud,
I ran to the window to take a look.

I saw nothing but a billowing cloud.
I froze a moment: hands folded, head bowed...
Then a voice yelled out, “Evacuate”
I swiftly left with the fleeing crowd.

Flashbacks from another date...
Was this an end decreed by fate?
I’d even left my glasses behind,
Since I’d gone in such a state.

I stumbled down the stairs half blind,
With painful memories fresh in my mind.
To a tragedy, I’d been resigned,
But this time, it seems, fate had been kind.

Word count: 108
 
4
By YMSYMS (Score: 6.133)
4

A photo album shows such life
Of Father, Mother, man, and wife
Beginnings, middles, and the ends
How they evolve, well that depends

A start may come from love and hope
(My lovely Aunt she did elope)
Her day, it was one of rapture
(Also, one of Kodak capture)

Filmed colour glory, blacks and whites
Chronicled being, dared delights
(Digital shots they have a place)
Photogs thrive in this human race

Time, it passes, more pages fill
We live forward, no chance for still
Memories collect, age does grow
If not for keepsakes, how to know?

Images thus will form my shroud
Future me is this way allowed
Of past-us and us-now, a link
Gaze, and of this family think…

Word count: 120
 
5
By karmalilly (Score: 6.105)
5

O' why were you hiding sweet Emily,
such vim within your letters?
Could tragedy have cursed thee
as an angel bereft of feathers?

Twas' Death so gallant you shied to breach
beyond the pearls - the wild night seas,
to convey the aim thou sought to teach;
and caress the soul with euphonic esprit?

Did you finally seek thy love,
where but the birds are bold to go?
Or too failed of it above
had your Eden just come to slow?


Pronunciation guide:

Cursed = kur-sid, not kurst.
Esprit = es-pree

ps. If you can name several of her poems I referenced, you sir or madam are super.

Word count: 105
 
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6
By IdleMonkey (Score: 6.01)
3

Gently floating in the autumn breeze,
Blowing silently through the trees,
Dancing carelessly too and fro,
Seductively,enchantingly, what a tease.

Wandering earth, far below,
From were once I used to grow,
Mother, Creator, Earth's the one,
How I got here I do not know.

All my energy from the sun,
My life journey has just begun,
Sometime golden, sometimes green,
I am not the only son.

Rarely heard yet always seen,
I need to get used to this routine,
For I am the one that makes this scene,
Sometimes golden,sometimes green.

Word count: 91
 
7
By Pestlett (Score: 5.989)
1

I waved to her a long goodbye
In hope that love was true
But when she turned I saw the lie
That puzzles me and you

What happened to eternity
And love of deeper hue
What happened to paternity
A love to start anew

But fear is strong in those who loved
And fear it will imbue
The fear that they will be beloved
By charms of someone new

But now I've learned to carry on
When all is much ado
For love and trust are not foregone
If each day you start true

And love is ripe within us all
So try not to subdue
The love that burns within your heart
And never say adieu

Word count: 117
 
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8
By watashi-wa (Score: 5.954)
1

Sleek silver shapes dance in the night,
They pause to fight or play,
The gathered wolf-pack is a wonderous sight,
Unless you are to be their prey.

A newborn cub spies its first full moon,
It begins a howl slow,
The sound begins that one day soon,
In power and terror shall grow.

The young hunter’s teeth flash white and red,
As his very first kill is made,
Wailing, the deer falls to its deathbed,
Then its skin from the pale bone is flayed.

The Alpha male stands atop a stone,
Surveying his pack and domain,
His younger opponent whines, whimpers and groans,
From his lessons taught in defeat and pain.

Old, torn and grey, the elder snarls loud,
At Death’s approaching breach,
Around her frame the pack all crowd,
But she’s sadly beyond their reach.

Sunrise comes fast and the pack slink away,
To hide from bright hostile view,
But when that sun shines its very last ray,
The wolves shall again run anew.

Word count: 165
 
9
By cshutt (Score: 5.737)
2

I struggle daily to survive
My existence in this dive
To rise above my surroundings
And leave behind earthly groundings.

Fighting for a way of life
Trying hard to please my wife
Knowing that again today
Failure will pave my way.

As a writer I will strive
To pen a story that’s alive
One that papers want to print
And pay me more than a cent.

Freebies I am tired of writing
My bottom lip is sore from biting
Some serious work I want to pen
Where, oh where, is my gin?

Word count: 92
 
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10
By Groggie (Score: 5.613)
3

My first breath- it would be my very first first.
A burst of fresh air into my lungs it burst.
The blue in my face faced the pale ceiling blue.
I'm new here, but I knew I'd not be here past "new."

Dead where I lay, yet still not quite dead.
My head was mess, but was not just my head.
The sky was as red as a red tinted sky.
A sigh of relief was my last breath; a sigh.

Word count: 81
 

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