Bonus: Poetry - Tanka

Bonus: Poetry - Tanka

Contest ended 4 years ago 9/11/2007 12:00:00 AM EDT

Contest Info

  • Cost: 5 credits
  • Jackpot: 50 credits

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First Place
# 1
By emily4real (Score: 6.947)
7

An oversized bag
spills over his small body
eyes squinting, smiling
my head tilts to hide my tear
as his clean hands wave goodbye

Word count: 24
 
Second Place
# 2
By Zandman75 (Score: 6.807)
10

Gray concrete buildings
stretching to claw at the clouds
like hard, numb fingers
Underneath, Earth softly dreams,
Recalling the touch of rain

Word count: 22
 
Third Place
# 3
By Lemmiwinks (Score: 6.747)
5

Born of stone and time
Sculpted from rushing waters
Rock carved by harsh winds
Eons of deserts and dunes
An hourglass earth never turns

Word count: 24
 
7

Wide eyes, baited breath,
The data swirls before me,
Up, down, like my mood,
Joy to sorrow with one click,
'refresh' brings no refreshment.

Word count: 24
 
5
By bevissimo (Score: 6.386)
5

Darkness to the west,
Thunderheads stampede this way.
Mountain trees tremble,
Unable to escape fate.
Lightning seeks its next victim.

Word count: 20
 
6
By ifancyspanky (Score: 6.23)
6

Silent and stalking,
She slinks along, quiet ease.
Tail twitches, ears flick,
Feline grace with deadly aim
As she pounces on her prey.

Word count: 23
 
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7
By vclubb (Score: 6.223)
4

As fall closes in
And colors begin to fade
He breathes his last breath
His pain ceases to exist
But my hurt has just begun

Word count: 25
 
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8
5

Light wind blows my hair,
Turning blonde into a dance.
As the sun weaves through,
And sets a halo above.
Angels only live in light.

Word count: 25
 
9
By mur308 (Score: 6.183)
5

How deeply runs love?

Infused in blood through my veins.

Enriching my soul,

Beguiles my sense, my reason.

Drowned in rapture, I am lost.

Word count: 24
 
10
By MollyCule (Score: 6.037)
7

Twelve days I watched you.
Twelve nights I sang whilst you slept.
Twelve days I waited
And lived off naught but coffee.
On the thirteenth you were gone.

Word count: 28
 

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