H2H: finding beauty in a dystopian science-fiction setting

H2H: finding beauty in a dystopian science-fiction setting

theLimeyBrit vs. Flu
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By theLimeyBrit (Score: 7.267)
7

Trash crunched under his feet as Zen walked down the empty street. He had heard that this was once a bustling high street, full of people and shops and traffic and commerce, but it was hard to believe that now. Windows were glazed with plywood and brick or, where those materials had been liberated, nothing. The sky was gone, walled out by the first level of the new city that had been built above the crime and decay of the old city in a bid to start afresh. Only the faintest rumor of daylight glimmered at the furthest ends of the street; every elsewhere was lit by denial lamps – cold beacons that flickered with a harsh frequency, specifically installed to discourage the denizens of the under-city from showing their faces in the street. Zen wore dark glasses, and looked at the ground.

Presently he arrived at one of the great banks of elevators that provided access to the upper levels. The denial lamps yielded to more humane illumination, but even though Zen knew a large population lived in this area, he could see only one other person: Shawnee, loitering in his usual spot in a doorway across the street from Elevator 8 South. Zen took a deep breath; today was the big day.

“Hi Shawnee. I’ve got the papers. They’re flawless.” He handed over two data cards to Shawnee, who did not return the greeting, but took a leashed shackle and a submission hood from his briefcase. “Ready?”

Zen nodded, but winced nonetheless as Shawnee forced the hood over his head and snapped the shackle onto his wrists. His vision restricted, Zen was entirely dependent on Shawnee to guide him. Shawnee smoothly adopted the slaveowner’s role by jerking the leash and cursing when Zen stumbled. They eventually settled on a locomotive rhythm, but by then they had entered the elevator. Shawnee performed the elaborate ID ritual that kept people like Zen in the basement and then Zen felt his stomach lurch as the elevator lifted him higher than he’d ever been since his arrival in the city.

Presently the doors slid open and Shawnee half led, half dragged Zen outside. Even with the hood on, Zen could appreciate how different this level was from the ground floor he was used to. The ground was empty of garbage and dust. The hallway was lit with a pleasant ambient light that came close to Zen’s memories of sunlight. Everything was perfect, as if flaws and smudges had been banished by official decree.

Zen hurried to catch up with Shawnee to ask where they were going, but he had barely opened his mouth before his captor backhanded him across the face. Shawnee said nothing until a few moments later, when they were in an access way that had less traffic.

“Ninety-eight percent of the public areas in the city are covered by cameras. Don’t ever break from your role again, or we’ll both get busted. We’re headed for a separate elevator that will take us to the upper city and the shuttle port.”

Sure enough, they soon came to a new elevator nexus, but they did not get in before Shawnee clipped Zen’s ear for gawking at the lurid advertising playing out in hyper-real color on the wall. Shawnee danced with the ID scanner, and once more Zen felt the ground drop away. This elevator was faster and more lushly appointed than the first, reflecting the tastes and stations of the citizens who had access to the exclusive upper levels of the city.

When the doors slid open Zen was expecting to see the busy hallways of the shuttle dock, where he and Shawnee intended to catch a flight to the offshore space port. He was therefore disoriented when the doors revealed a richly decorated apartment, and Shawnee swept him inside before Zen could say anything.

“Welcome to my home,” said Shawnee. “I regret to say that there has been a slight change in plan.”

Zen instantly grasped the implication, and swung his shackled wrists at his all-too-real captor. Shawnee, anticipating the attack, jerked the leash and Zen found himself staring at the ceiling. Suddenly he felt as if his head was being crushed in a vice, and realized that Shawnee had activated the submission hood. Conceding defeat, he went limp.

“Very good,” said Shawnee. “You can see why I don’t particularly have any reason to go offworld. The colonies are still rather short on luxury at this stage. However, I could use some help around here. I think you’ll agree it’s a better life than on the ground … ?”

Zen ground his teeth. “At least on the ground I was free.”

“Pah,” Shawnee snorted. “Free until the Grates caught you. Then you’d be deported and back out in the cold where you came from. What do you know of free? Work makes you free. So work for me.” He pressed a button on the leash, and the shackles fell off Zen’s wrists. “We’ll keep the hood on you for n…”

But Zen had already made his move with an agility, speed and grace that Shawnee had failed to anticipate. His trachea cracked with a sickening pop, and Zen was free.

Five minutes later, Zen had modified one of the data cards – using black-market equipment that he himself had procured for Shawnee – and used his late host’s net account to reserve a seat on the next shuttle flight.

A third elevator ride finally brought Zen into fresh air at the apex of the city. It had recently rained, and the whole city glistened like a jewel below him. The late-afternoon sun burst out from the clouds, and a golden shuttle approached Zen like an eagle, ready to carry him away to the spaceport, the colonies, and freedom.

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By Flu (Score: 7.105)
6

He stood at the spot in the road that he had cleaned out. Quick glances around verified the unending silence and desolation. The urban tumbleweeds blew sporadically around in eddies of wind that carried the emptiness in a fierce chill. The years had not been kind to his town. What he needed now though was space and the street provided enough with the area he had cleared.

Running his hands over the device one more time, he checked every detail until satisfied that everything was ready. The small tests that had run in the past few days had been successful but this was the one that mattered.

Glancing one more time at a small slip of paper before folding it into his pocket, he turned the device towards the street and began the final programming. As almost a warning, the death-knell of a strong wind suddenly picked up and rushed down the street, bringing dust clouds and ghostly howling to the barren city until gently settling back down in a fine mist of dust as the unearthly silence once again reclaimed the empty street.

Deciding not to give himself another chance to rethink, he pushed the button and suddenly she was there. She was confused… bewildered… and obviously stunned. He was amazed how real she was. Gasping to catch her bearings she slumped as he swooped her into his arms, not daring to believe that he was actually holding her.

“You’ve just traveled through time,” he whispered into her ear. “You are now in 2057. I’ll explain everything,”

She turned and gentle brown eyes glanced into his with both trembling fear and questioning curiosity. Unable to comprehend what she was hearing and seeing, he gently eased her down to the curb. “Wha…” was all she could manage.

With a heavy sigh he fought to concentrate on working to allay her fears. “A moment ago it was February 7th, 2008. Now it is around 2057.” He turned his head and gazed off into the distance, unable to take the confusion he was reading in her right now. As her strength gathered, she nervously looked around in stunned silence, witnessing the desolation that was all round, wondering at the quiet atmosphere and lack of life that seemed to be so prevalent.

“Your world was rocked by war shortly after you left. Death, disease, starvation, anger, rage, frustration, apathy, pestilence… all slammed the world with every ounce of power it had and the world was never the same. 93% of the population was taken almost immediately.” He closed his eyes and brought the story to life through words. “Man’s inability to live in harmony finally rose to the point where it wasn’t even called World War III, just THE Event.”

“I wasn’t even born yet,” he continued, staring into her eyes, yet lost in his own thoughts. “I was a product of a pair of survivors that miraculously found each other and decided to live out theirs lives together, but time finally caught up with them.” He wiped a tear away.

She finally worked away enough of the dryness in her throat to bring a quiet question to her lips “Why me?” was all she could utter.

He pulled that simple piece of paper out of his pocket. It was an old newspaper clipping. The setting was a book store at a book signing. The author and a fan were engaged in conversation. But SHE was in the background having worked in the store that day. Her name was even mentioned in the photo credits.

“It had to be fate,” he barely managed to get out. “That clipping blew into my house one day. From the moment I saw you…” He turned to look away, knowing he probably seemed crazy. “I’ve spent years researching and digging threw old newspapers, data files, anything I can get my hands on, trying to find out more about you…” His voice trailed off. “There wasn’t much. You appeared to be a loner, shying away from people. I just thought that…” He stumbled again, trying to determine how best to phrase it. “Your town… THIS town was one of the first places hit.” Recognition of the street finally registered to her. “You were one of the first to die in that initial blast that started THE Event… on February 7th, 2008.” He looked straight at her. “Your body was never found. I pulled you here, seconds before that blast would have taken your life.”

Something finally clicked and she began to speak with more comfort. “All of those little notes I’ve found throughout my life that I couldn’t explain.” She looked straight into his eyes. “The ones signed ‘Your Future Love’. My secret admirer… You?” She grew more thoughtful. “All of my dreams of a man who would carry me away... Who only cared about me... Who seemed to know everything about me...”

He nodded. “I sent them from here only over the past few days, but I have been watching you your whole life.” The gentle redness of embarrassment settled into his cheeks.

Finally understanding, she waited for him to explain, but began to hope that maybe she had found something new… something different… something exciting. And finally may have found that man.

“I can send you to anywhere in time,” he rubbed his hand on the machine. “You name it, I can send you there. I just couldn’t let this life,“ he held out the news article, “end like that.”

“No,” she said. “I think I would like to know more about life… and time… here.” She took his hand to help her stand up. “And more about a man who really cares about me.”

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