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As autumn settles in, our skies are filled with the sights and sounds of migrating waterfowl returning to their traditional wintering sites to the south. The raucous brays of the mallard, scaup, wigeon, blue-winged teal and merganser fracture the chill air overhead. Hundreds of Canada and Ross' geese, the Snow, the Blue and the Brant arrange themselves in their distinctive chevron formation, sweeping towards the tropics in a stunning display of nature's order. It is a sight that never fails to fill us with a sense of awe.

Chance plays no part in the certainty of migration's annual ritual. It is an instinct, a call that is essential to the inner workings of all migratory birds, as critical to their existence as their wings, their webbed feet, or their natural camouflage. As instincts go, mankind has learned that he can control his own visceral behavior to a certain degree, so that his civility, his concern for the well-being of all creatures upon our earth, can co-exist with his own innate need to hunt and kill these very same creatures. It is a struggle between conscience and impulse, a risky balancing act that is not without its share of bad judgment and tragedy.

Hunting season is upon us. For a few short weeks, our hunters and sportsmen repeat their timeless ritual that serves to keep waterfowl populations in check, and provide food for our families. But this time, there is a dark side. If we are to heed the stories that are reaching us from the woodlands surrounding East Cornpile, the scales are suddenly tilted horribly to the side of tragedy.

Yesterday, veteran hunter and conservationist Virgil “Teefless” Hickey returned from a duck-hunting expedition in the Boggy Hollow area adjacent to Tabaccychaw Pond. A reader of this column for many years, he related his incredible, first-hand tale to me personally. Mr. Hickey’s eyewitness account of the events that took place last Thursday at the confluence of Spitswaller Creek and Hazel’s Pie Swamp drainage culvert provided a chilling insight into the activities of scores of “neo-hunters”, a sinister clan of camping vandals apparently armed with rolls of silver colored, ultra-sticky fabric. This can only be the notorious Duck Tape, sold in plain view at Cheeky’s Hardware, and apparently available even at Pucker’s Drugs ‘n Guns. Teefless (“I losted my teef stoppin’ a pig from guttin’ my duck, and dat’s why dey calls me dat”) told The Spectator yesterday that he and his friends Nosepork Stevens (of Chuckerville) and Leon Toadass (of Gummy Hump Fire District) were hunkered in a blind on Hazel’s Pie near Pecker’s Shed calling pintails from Tabaccychaw, several hundred yards to their left. Their luck had been poor. The ducks were there, that much was certain, but they seemed disinclined to move. Suddenly, a tremendous disturbance behind and to the right of Teefless and his friends destroyed their reverie, and threw the quiet of Boggy Hollow into turmoil.

“Dey isn’t no duck comin’ in dis noise nohow”, Teefless recalls commenting to his companions. Leaving their blind, the three men quickly climbed the shallow berm separating them from the disturbance to investigate. In the clearing beyond the rise, strung between two leafless cottonwood saplings about fifty feet apart, they could see what appeared to be a tight web of mangled silver tape spanning a vertical distance of over twenty feet. “Dat was dat Duck Tape, dat’s what dat was. Dey was a whole load of ducks in dat tape, and couple varmints, and I don’t know what all” completely and inextricably involved in a huge, tangled morass between the two trees, raising a ruckus of deafening proportions. There appeared to be no one else in the area, by Mr. Hickey’s account, so the three men elected to descend the gentle slope and try to assist the trapped animals.

The worst was yet to come.

“Nosepork, he’s jest pluckin’ a possum off some tape, and Leon’s got hisself a mallard, when holy jeez almightly”, explained Mr. Hickey. “Holy man. Here come a whole mess o’ ducks. Twenty, forty ducks, looks like scaups. Fifty, sixty, maybe. Looks like a sempy-five, eighty maybe, rollin’ on in. A whole bunch. Hunnerds. And right behind ‘em comes black labs, two of ‘em, big barkin’ b***hes, six of ‘em with hell on their mind, ten maybe. And a Chesapeake, howlin’ to die, and three-four golden labs. Must be fifty dogs, all barky an’ howly, and all them ducks, they come crashin’ into the tape, and they’s all tangled up. And Grizzly Adams. He’s in there, and the tape’s on his beard, and he’s real mad, hollerin’. Miz Adams too, she’s a looker, an’ she’s hollerin’ too. They’s all tangled up, makin’ just a hell of a racket, and we’s pickin’ ‘em out, me an’ Nosey an’ Leon, doin’ our best.”

The relative remoteness of their location prevented Teefless and his companions from alerting the authorities, and thus the duty of extricating countless creatures from their sticky, silvery prison fell to the resources and wile of Messrs. Hickey, Stevens and Toadass alone. The three of them reportedly rescued over nine hundred ducks, dozens of retrievers, setters and pointers, several indigenous beasts such as opossum, beaver, otter, harbor seal, vole, a visiting meerkat, and three humans. “Mr. Grizzly was real nice. He give me a John Henry back at the cabin”, reported Mr. Hickey. “Miz Adams looked on. I’m pretty sure all dis axially happened, but we was a bit hooped on shine.”

It sounds disturbingly real to me, Mr. Hickey. Where has our civility taken us? Can the average person’s sense of sportsmanship and fair play no longer be counted upon to win the day? Or has our complex, arrogant, intellectually motivated manipulation of our own instincts doomed some of our number to permanently aberrant vandalism? Mr. Hickey’s tale fills me with dread. I, for one, will no longer countenance the use of Duck Tape for any reason. My AMC Gremlin upholstery can simply stay torn.

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During the holiday season there is a general suspension of all zoning, committee, planning, council, school board, insert-group-of-fat-bored-men-here meetings to report on. Most of the decisions that come out of those meetings are discussed here, on these hallowed editorial pages of The Valley Globe. For 85 years, the VG, as it is fondly called, takes the issues of most importance to our readers and analyzes them. It's a fine journalistic tradition. And in true form to the "renegade" nature of the community journalist, we'll discuss a topic close to the hearts, and wallets, of our own powers that be.

Advertising.

To be specific, subminimal advertising.

Within the last few months, I've noticed a decline in the quality of advertising in this and other local newspapers. Gone are the days of the cherubic faced kiddies drinking bottles of pop. We've lost the age of elegantly dressed ladies selling frocks and the distinguished gentlemen hawking pool tables (Hi, this is the publisher.) and fine liquors. Now, it's bright blocks of color, screaming text reading "Buy, Buy, Buy" and all the truly important information, the parts 'they' don't really want you to know, is in the fine print.

No, fine is too nice a word.

The subminimal print.

Take Tuesday's edition for example. In the back of the Living section (Ad revenue is down.)lives an ad for the upcoming "Mounds of Pound Monster Truck Rally" at the Everhearst Colliseum. "Madness and mayhem with rally circuit star GRAVEMUNCHER begins at Noon sharp. Get in, get your seat, get pumped!" Well, as like most of you, I was perched over my phone ready to yield some hard-earned dollars over to get my ticket for "smashin' bashin' and crashin' Sunday!!!" That was until I read the fine, no, subminimal print. What 'they' don't want you to realize is that the doors for the event close at 12:30, no one will be allowed in late. And you'll be sitting through three excruciating hours of tractor pull before Gravemuncher rolls onto the scene.

Imagine sitting (Our paper is in trouble.)there, 1:30 p.m., three kiddies hypered up on cotton candy and pop, chanting "Gravemuncher, Gravemuncher, Gravemuncher." And you're staring at a full 90 minutes more of this. Would you buy the tickets then?

Perhaps not.

And swing over to the sports section. On page C-7, near the field hockey results. The ad for "Clyde's House of Lovely Ladies." Fair enough that the readers of the sports pages will be more likely to care that Miss Enchanted August 1999 will be performing this weekend. But the fine print can be misleading. For a full (I may have to lay people off.)two months, I complained to the advertising execs over the subminimal print in this ad. It wasn't until recently that they told me that B.Y.O.B. was in fact, not a euphemism (Think of this guy right here.)for breasts. But, in such small type, located right under the left buttock of Miss 1999, what was I to think?

A wise man once said, "advertising may be described as the science of arresting human intelligence long enough to get money from it." And truer words (The editorial writer.)have never been spoken. When will we being to see that it is our responsibility (Whine whine whine.)as journalists, that the entire paper educates the public. That it is the package, as a whole, that must persuade people to rise up from their mental mediocrity and pursue a higher level of (Think of him at your work asking for a job.)thought.

Subminimal advertising rips the responsibility away from the consumer. It allows the dummying down of our (You'll never be allowed your own opinion again.)nation to continue. It says, "We'll only tell you what we really want you to know. Trust us." But, nay, I say, NAY, I do not (Trust me, I know.)trust them, those men in hats with dollar signs for eyes. Their subminimal advertising strips away all value and honesty inherent in good business (And he smells like cheese.)practices.

For shame, that such newspapers, that our OWN newspaper, allow these dastardly ways to continue. Here, another, on page B-6. A local salon is having a special on permanents. Fantastic, you say, I've (Not a nice thought, eh?)always wanted to have that sexy, wavy look. That's what 'they' want you to think. They want you to come into their salon, with hopes and dreams of happiness and romance. That's what they're (So support our advertisers.)selling! They don't want you to know that their "special" price does not include washing, or drying or styling. So if you happen to stumble into their 'lair' with only the $50 for the special in your pocket (Say you saw their ad in the VG.) you can bet that you'll be leaving with a sloppy, soppy, smelly mess on your head.

Subminimal advertising is (Why not renew your subscription as well?)one of the most destructive and pervasive forces threatening our journalistic integrity. It must stop. We must unite and sound (Otherwise.)the call, that we will not be pursuaded so easily. We will not be patronized. We will not be 'succubbussed' into your caves (This guy, he's all yours.)of capitalistic contempt.

Readers beware, read the subminimal print. Your happiness, nay, your very lives may depend on it.

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