Bonus: Poetry - Mom/Dad

Bonus: Poetry - Mom/Dad

Let's honor Mom and Dad in a poem.
Contest ended 4 years ago 5/24/2008 12:00:00 AM EDT

Contest Info

  • Cost: 10 credits
  • Jackpot: 40 credits

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First Place
# 1
By portboy76 (Score: 7.506)
6

Her kiss was antiseptic balm
For every childhood cut and bruise
Her spit and tissue wiped away
The stains that sponge and soap refuse
She led me down her moral route
With words both soft and absolute
She was my tailor, cook and barber
My heart and soul, my home and harbour

Her shining wisdom steered me through
That treacherous maze of teenage years
She let me make my own mistakes
And cry my own repentant tears
She was my all-embracing saint
Absolved my wrongs without constraint
My faults could never strip her of
Her warmest smile, her blindest love

She was the confidant and friend
Who read my conscience in my eyes
Her humour, clever but restrained
Would often cut me down to size
When I boasted great ability
Through jest she brought humility
Allowing little vanity,
Or pride, or damned profanity!

The years and seasons take their toll;
She faded slowly into grey
As Time the thief stole youth and health
Still never could he take away
Her love of life, her love of laughter
Her dream assured of sweet Hereafter;
She was, when we bade last farewells
Just bones, and love, and little else

Her absence is my constant pain,
A gnawing hurt without relief
Her passing drew deep waters from
Unfathomable wells of grief
Yet still she saves me from despair
In smiling memories, bright and fair
She is the graceful soul who keeps
Hallowed the earth in which she sleeps

Word count: 245
 
Second Place
# 2
By Jujubie (Score: 6.05)
1

First

You saw me wobble
You let me fall
You watched my firsts
You praised my words

Then

We shared our thoughts
We drew our limits
We lived our truths
We went our ways

Now

I cherish your presence
I respect your silence
I owe you freedom
I honour you, father

Word count: 51
 
2

It's been two-and-twenty years,
Since I popped out your leg's ears
And I find it hard to say,
Though I think it every day,
That I love you Mummy dear
And I hope that you see clear
It is I, through love's own haze,
Who finds all your special ways
Most amusing.
Like that time at Chester Zoo,
When we saw that Monkey poo,
And you quipped like bees in spring,
That our Daddy was that thing,
And I laughed and knew not why
Of the love which made you cry;
Yet you carried on with cheer,
And with pride I hold you near;
For you reared me up alone,
And not once heard I a moan.
And I love as I loved then,
When with sheets and chairs a den
We both made and spoke of ghosts
And of goblins.
There's a phrase that I once heard
In a song whilst eating curd,
I was just a little boy,
“Aloha wau ia 'oe”
Were the words that spoke to me.
Now I've grown there's more, you'll see:
I shall quote, in Thai a book:
“มันเป็นเธอ แม่ ที่ผมรัก” (mun pen ter, maa, tee pom ruk - It is you, mum, that I love)
And I know another way:
Matris meae amo te (my mother I love you)
l'uccello mio amo, (I love my bird)
There are many words, and though
All this world is thanks to you,
I can only give in lieu,
For the pain I put you through,
A hug, a kiss and a smile
And though it takes awhile,
I will let the whole globe know
That I love you.

Word count: 272
 
Third Place
# 4
By gloobella (Score: 5.527)
0

Where are the mothers?
Inside, rocking the babies to sleep.
Where are the mothers?
Outside, strolling the babies to sleep.

Who are the mothers?
The sweet, nurturing, supportive ones.
Who are the mothers?
The tired, harried, exasperated ones.

When are the mothers?
At night, watching breathing and the unopened door.
When are the mothers?
In the morning, driving places and scrubbing the floor.

What are the mothers?
Women of tenacity, creativity, strength.
What are the mothers?
Women of compassion, gentleness, love

Why are the mothers?
Because they love their young ones so.
Why are the mothers?
Because they love their grown ones so.
Why are the mothers?
Because they love their children so.

Word count: 113
 
5
By Silvarha (Score: 5.224)
0

As the airplanes in the sky
Decided to explode instead of fly
Earthquakes forcing building to collapse
Disordering the geographic maps
And hurricanes swapped the land
But how can I ever understand?
That of all these terrors you chose me
Now please hear my begging plea
I didn’t do my best at school
Always acted like an utmost fool
Strangled teachers, pulled pony-tails
Tortured creatures, threw with nails
But now I have committed the greatest sin
A whole tradition thrown into the bin
Mother’s day forgotten
I feel ashamed, my soul is rotten
Giving you this kiss is all I can do now
So hear my pledging vow
Forgive my sin
And let my punishement begin

Word count: 116
 
0

Kissedy missedy layd on
the floor, Kissedy missedy
she was so poor.
Kissedy missedy I want U so
much, U are the bilberry
I want to touch

miss U Henne Ellen

Word count: 31
Please do not critique my entry.
 

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