Bonus: Beginning Poetry - Summer

Bonus: Beginning Poetry - Summer

The solstice is coming!
Contest ended 3 years ago 6/21/2008 12:00:00 AM EDT

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First Place
# 1
By RyGuySuperFly (Score: 7.506)
9

Do you remember the summer of ’99,
And how the time has flown,
Thirteen years old we ruled our lives,
Our destinies our own,
Baseball games and water slides,
Grand slams and broken toes,
These precious memories fill my mind,
Do you remember the summer of ’99?

Do you remember, when we felt brave,
And wondered far from home,
Went hiking down through ‘Dead Man’s Cave’,
To conquer the unknown,
Then Kevin slipped and hurt his leg,
His knee was nearly blown,
That poor guy, he cried all day,
We laughed all the way home.

Do you remember, when we were fools,
As we would often be,
Looking for love at the city pool,
Our hearts worn on our sleeve,
Then Michael went and broke the rules,
Though harmless as could be,
He sank chocolate bars in the swimming pool,
That place was closed all week.

Do you remember when I moved away?
The week before ninth grade,
How we made plans so I could stay,
In the tree house where we played,
Late one night, Mike brought my plate,
Full of sandwiches he’d made,
We were both spotted, plain as day,
He volunteered to take the blame.

I remember the summer of ’99,
And I think of how I’ve grown,
Twenty-one, with child and wife,
And a place to call our own,
Riding bikes and catching fire-flies,
Bottle rockets, skipping stones,
These precious moments fill my life,
As we live a summer all our own.

Word count: 246
 
Second Place
# 2
By Jujubie (Score: 6.625)
6

In the garden, lush greens grow
Strangling frail buds as they show
Life and colour. Left unmanned
How long can young sprouts withstand
The harsh woven creeping foe?

With murmurs, sighs and shadow
Scentless heads sway in sorrow
Yearning for a caring hand
In the garden.

Decaying bench and barrow,
Strewed rocks witness their fellow
Weeds inching their course unplanned.
A friend’s creative touch and
Balance imposed à nouveau
In the garden.

*****
A Rondeau is 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the same metrical length).

Word count: 127
 
Third Place
# 3
By bevissimo (Score: 6.554)
6

Languid ladies lounging,
Long, lithe and lovely.
Sipping sweet Snapple;
basking bronze beauties.

Sweat beads burst through sweet oil,
inching achingly over and down
supple and succulent skin,
Finally fully fabric free.

Fine feminine flesh flower;
Perfect pearly petals, patinaed peach;
Twinkling tinted toenails touching,
Stamens seeking insemination -

On the second tallest roof in town.
Excellent view,
          For all.

Word count: 59
 
6

An orchestra of air conditioners plays an evening serenade,
As the warmth of the night air lingers.
Fans strategically placed throughout rooms,
And blankets tossed about on the floor.
We lie awake, restless, while dehydration sets in;
Without a single breeze to bring us comfort.
Lights flicker on and off, as sleepless beings drift in and out,
In search of some relief.
But alas there are the “others”;
Those with the costly chill that blows through the night.
The ones who make us green with envy,
As they sleep ever so soundly.
Overcome with temptation, we surrender to the box on the wall;
Perhaps the bill will be worth the solace.
This summertime charade is all too common to us…
…The apartment dwellers.

Word count: 123
 
5
By doctordew2005 (Score: 6.356)
0

A sun that shines may only mean
the passing of what once was
the bringing of what is to be
the welcoming of what is
All around us

A warmth and comfort known to those who
see in music vibrant
dance in color fluid
feel in visions vivid
All around us

A perfect time for
rest in moments quiet
lay in hours peaceful
sleep in arms wrapped
All around us

Now a darkness left for dreams of
passing of what once was
dance of color fluid
sleep in arms wrapped
All around me

Word count: 93
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6
By Pixeltron (Score: 6.317)
6

A radical sun wakes me up from my obsolete artic dreams
And let me hold the green plain lawn preserving the perfume of life
Spread through the fields of naked feet looking for a noble freedom
Flirting with flowers dressed in their mystical colors and shouting salutes
While dormant pale skins sense the arrival of a liquid festival
And pupils burst in excitement while water drops strike the children
Disorganized smiles travel in the air inviting to play with a shy season
Sweating limbs are their answer, lost in the mass of happiness
Spicy scents surround the joyful grills singing cooking melodies
Dancing pets knitting fellowship with their cheerful masters
And when the day prepares its nostalgic exodus
My impetuous heart daydreams with the next adventurous day

Word count: 127
 
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7
By photog101 (Score: 6.19)
4

When the flowers dance
and winds caress.
The bees fly free
and trees are dressed,
ready to shade and
relieve from stress
Halcyon days are here to stay

Jasmine and Honeysuckle
Come out for the day,
Impregnating the air
To keep fall at bay;
Halcyon days are here to stay.

The setting sun
Goes down for the day;
And the summer fires
Come out to play,
Halcyon days are here to stay...

Word count: 72
 
8
By silversapphire (Score: 6.184)
5

Winding lanes weave slowly through
this land of every coloured hue
grasses jealously guard the roadside
letting wild flowers burst with pride

Trees bow gently as I pass
below like an eager child
to see what is round the next corner
as the countryside slowly unwinds

And in a distant cornfield
lie the makings of summer hay
Farmers toiling long in the fields
on this glorious summer day

Life goes on in Northumberland
as it has for centuries past
let no one be in any doubt
it must remain steadfast

Unspoilt for now, long may it be so
let it’s beauty and peace always be
perpetually untouched by urban sprawl
Northumberland - be forever free!

My heart aches for this wondrous place
when I am no longer here
I’m not complete when I leave her behind
and I always shed a tear

This perfect well kept secret
this balm to soothe the soul
this free and open landscape
I want to call my own

For this is where I want to be
here, and nowhere else
Northumberland is my paradise
And where I take my rest

Northumberland, this precious jewel
Set deep in England’s county crown


© Silver Sapphire 110108

Word count: 198
 
9
By clemea (Score: 6.02)
3

Light, all around, fills my skin,
Turning it browner than before.
Fluttering wings fly above,
As I watch how the birds soar.

I continue to lay right here,
On the golden grains of sand.
Hearing the whooshing of water,
Curling and hitting the land.

Up above there are no clouds,
Just a covering blue beam.
A familiar smell whisks past,
Must be milkshakes and ice-cream!

This is summer at the beach,
Feels like it was made just for me.
Always summer to make me feel
Like I am totally free!

Word count: 90
 
10
By Chimmi (Score: 5.748)
1

Watch as the bee flutters through the grass,
And stop to smell the roses as you pass.
Gaze upon the serene fields
With awe from the tranquility it wields.

Everyone enjoys this time of year
Because the skies seem so crisp and clear.
Witness as a beaver silently steals bark from a tree;
While a young child skips through the grass with glee.

Observe the rays of sun throughout the skies.
It seems surreal to view this sight with my weary eyes.
This season could put a smile on anyone’s face;
Even though, the world seems to runs at a faster pace.

Word count: 102
 

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