Bonus: Poetry - Halloween!

Bonus: Poetry - Halloween!

Trick or treat!
Contest ended 3 years ago 11/3/2008 12:00:00 AM EDT

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  • Cost: 10 credits
  • Jackpot: 70 credits

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First Place
# 1
3

In darkness, in shadow, in dim moonlight
this is the time when our spirits awake
to be someone else. For just this one night

our fears embraced, unwilling to break.
Our demons exposed, no longer within.
This is the time when our spirits awake.

Devils and goblins, our manifest sin,
run free in the night to parents delight.
Our demons exposed, no longer within.

Then pixie, nixie, ethereal sprite,
on pink dance slippers and delicate wing,
run free in the night to parents delight.

Memories of costumes and joy they’d bring.
Bold in your deception, taking up the veil
on pink dance slippers and delicate wing.

With smiles and laughter, your demon you trail
In darkness, in shadow, in dim moonlight
Bold in your deception, taking up the veil
to be someone else for just this one night

Word count: 138
 
Second Place
# 2
By whatevermj (Score: 7.277)
3

The scarecrow watched from his throne of hay,
as preparations marked the day.
Lanterns, pumpkins, and little stuffed ghosts.
Cobwebs and spiders hung from the posts.
A bubbling punchbowl, with cups for a toast,
a cheer, a jeer, or a good-natured boast.
The children costumed from head to toe,
princesses, monsters, and demons of woe.
Made up and painted in time for the show,
and hardly able to wait for the go.
To set out into darkness, their sacks in tow,
reaching every house in the row!
To honor the ones that scare them so,
when the house doth thump, and the wind doth blow.
To laugh and joke at the evil beasts,
that plot to make them part of their feasts!
To scare and shock and earn their treat,
so long as they stay on their feet.
To share a nervous laugh or two,
at glowing skulls and eyeball stew,
or mannequins with bloodied shoes,
from all the chopping up they do!
To feel the tingle down their spine,
as night draws on, they start to pine,
to be home where they know it's safe,
their bags now fat, their costumes chafe.
As suddenly the air feels thick,
and candle flames leap from their wick,
as chill winds vow to make them sick,
their fear now grows with every tick.
Night turns wicked before their eyes,
and shadows now hide evil spies.
To home, just as fast as your feet
will let you beat a swift retreat,
through ghastly walks and darkened streets.
Escape, I said, and make it fleet.
And spare a nod for this scarecrow king,
not just for setting the crows to wing,
but for all the safe passage that I give
and for letting oh so many live.
When my powers are at their peak,
and I need do little more than speak
to set loose all your darkest fears
and cackle at your frightened tears
with a sound of ancient dusty glass
broken upon the dried dead grass.
I greet your return with a gleeful gaze,
my grin is wide, my eyes ablaze.
Remember this rule, right to the letter,
You think you know, but I know better!

Happy Halloween!

Word count: 366
 
Third Place
# 3
By bsistrunk (Score: 7.08)
4

Halloween’s here, another year passed,
And this year I have the same problem as last.
The day fast approaches, and to my chagrin
I’ve forgotten to pick-out a costume, again!

To Wal-Mart, to Target, a-shopping I run,
With hopes that I’ll find something easy, but fun.
I scoured each row, but as I suspected,
Austin Powers. Jack Sparrow. Costumes: Rejected.

How about Goodwill, for Halloween dress?
I could get my whole outfit for five bucks, or less!
The plan sounded good, but frustrations grew more,
Not one butterfly collar in the whole crazy store.

What's in my house, I can use in this pinch?
Some sheets for a toga? That costume's a cinch!
Or an old uniform from jobs long gone by.
Do they even fit? Do I dare even try?

Well I put on both costumes, and to my dismay,
My slim waist from high-school has long gone away
The mirror met me with a horrible fright:
Toga far too revealing, Arby’s outfit too tight.

Well I went to the party, you’ll be glad to know,
Board over my head, two gold trophies for show.
“Who’s that over there, standing with such aplomb?”
I’m a proud trophy mantle, from worth1000 dot com.

Word count: 203
 
4
By LadyMin (Score: 7.064)
6

T’was the All Hallow’s Even, a night cold and dark,
No moon in the sky and no starlight, no spark.

A wild, howling wind chased the clouds with all might.
And no soul to be seen – it was All Hallow’s Night.

A night where you know something is on the prowl,
When even the rain tastes like fear and smells foul.

At the end of a road, on the top of the hill
Stood a house, and its look would sure give you a chill.

The ramshackle quirky old house stood alone,
But high up in a window a single light shone.

And there, in the attic, sat Crazy Old Maud.
Of the night, of the date, the old lady knew naught.

She sat there, sipped her tea, took a bite from her scone,
Smiled her toothless, faint grin, a harmless old crone.

But she wasn’t alone – her beloved Ebenezer,
Her husband, her mate – lay downstairs in the freezer.

Yes, she cared for him, faithfully, day after day,
Served him tea that he never drank, to her dismay.

She pondered that issue when from the front door
Came a sound, came a noise that was hard to ignore.

And groaning and moaning she rose from her chair,
Crept down all the stairs and croaked hoarsely “Who’s there?”

She opened to see two or three beaming faces,
Shining eyes, gaudy colours, a smile flashing braces.

All breathless, exited, they started to tweet:
“Good evening, lady, and TRICK – OR TREAT!”

All squealing and giggling, the kids stood their ground
Maud’s mouth cracked a grin which looked deeply unsound.

“Just a minute, my sweethearts, and I’ll be right back,”
Said the hag, turned around, disappeared in the shack.

A little girl fidgeted, her name was Pattie,
And whispered: “The people, they say that she’s batty!”

They heard searching and rummaging all through the house,
Until Maud reappeared, and brought with her – her spouse.

“Dear kids, let me please introduce my dear hubby,
I’m sorry, the frost made his hair a bit grubby.”

Quite astonished, Old Maud saw the kids scream with fright,
Watched them screeching and fleeing into the cold night.

She hugged Ebenezer and whispered to him:
”The youth of today – come and go at a whim.”

She then turned around, and she carried the head
Back inside, to the freezer, its chilly, rough bed.

Then she finished her tea and her scone with delight
All alone in the attic – on Halloween’s night.

Word count: 411
 
5
By Jujubie (Score: 6.039)
2

On Halloween the thrills of fear
With screams in the shadow appear
Grasped hand, weak voice: "Should I explore?"
Wearing courage, totters to door
Eyes on treasure, feet on frontier.

Forbidden treats, earned with a cheer
A pillowcase, bigger this year
Nourishing dreams of always more
On Halloween.

Treats are sorted, adults stand near
Spying to grasp rejects to clear
Candy sampled after the chore
Sleep invades will, promptly a snore
Lifts the spirits, without a tear
On Halloween.

Word count: 79
Please do not critique my entry.
 
6
By waterlovinguy (Score: 5.706)
5

creaky porch, door bell
jack-o-latern of candy
run to the next house

Word count: 12
 
7
By kate7819 (Score: 5.639)
2

Pumpkin smiles
and Stray black cats
Hungry faces
on screaming brats
Sugar highs
and candy lows
dictate the way
the night will go
Dressed as witches,
heroes and villains
prowling the streets
of terrified citizens
Trick or treat
and a few good screams
Such is the joy
of Halloween.

Word count: 49
 

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