The author's works – past and future – are destined to be shelved with writings of like quality, and serve as a reminder to those of similar talent who also aspire to greatness.

Even without characters, your story would be just as good.

A highly stimulating and engaging piece that invites the reader to peruse each sentence several times in order to comprehend its true meaning.

I like the way that you have steered away from the old cliché that a story should have a beginning, a middle and an end.

A very well concealed plot!

Fascinating how you are able to express the same thing differently in each sentence without ever having to repeat yourself!

With a single piece of writing, you have become a catalyst for change to language programmes in schools across our nation.

The use of diverse vocabulary never left this reader in any doubt as to your knowledge of archaic and obscure words.

What a surprising twist at the end. You kept it hidden so well, there is no way anyone could ever see that coming. Even when I reread it, I didn't find a single clue!

Well done on using such a recognizable plot! Your piece is comforting in its familiarity. The clichés you have selected were excellently chosen; none were atypical, which some would commend you for. I could never write anything so conventional.