Bonus: Poetry : Teamwork

Bonus: Poetry : Teamwork

Working together.
Contest ended 2 years ago 2/1/2010 12:00:00 AM EDT

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  • Cost: 10 credits
  • Jackpot: 100 credits

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First Place
# 1
By BiggestMidget (Score: 6.809)
2

Ink lines our lungs,
As words fill our pages,
Wagging tongues whip,
As a silent war rages.
It rages in your backyard,
It rages in your home,
It comes in through your tv set,
And in your mind when you're alone.
In the whisper of white noise,
the small print of advertising conditions,
One hundred and eleven soldiers, boys,
Fighting a war of policitians.
It comes in through your windows,
It is settled on the streets,
It's in graffiti, in prose,
It comes in through the door,
Trudging, homeless, through the sleet.
It sits in cells, and marks the days,
as tap drips and time delays.
Is the "scum" of society, the so-called grime,
(The uneducated, uncivilised, unrefined,
The hopeless but the hoping,
the barely living but somehow coping)
A symbol of a united, sunburnt country?
Hidden behind bowls of potpourri.
To some extent we are all free,
Taught to listen, yet not to hear,
Taught not to love, yet taught to fear.
At the ATM, consume yourself,
At the lightswitch, burning the iceshelf,
you can feel the fight in your fingertips,
it continues as words on your lips.
"We fight a war of peace."
Do we really?
with one hundred and eleven custody deaths yearly,
This is our war,
We fight it every day,
'Save the earth',
'Save our children'
'Save us until it is too late'
Voices of protest become one,
Until it becomes too much, too hard, too sad,
Until even the hippy's got a gun.

Word count: 249

I can never think of teamwork without considering how important it is to our future now, more than ever, when facing so many global issues. Unfortunately teamwork often turns into a personal war, and aims for peace turn to actions of devastation.
Eh, just my take on the topic, constructive criticism is very welcome (we do live in a democracy right :P).

 
2
By DrRobot (Score: 6.662)
2

The final few seconds before it all came down.
Before either defeat, or victory, would control their being.
With victory came a crown,
With defeat, an urge of fleeing.
The plan was simple, to double team every guy on the field.
The sun’s rays were smothered all over their faces.
The final card had been dealed
There was so much ground to cover between the two bases.
They were tired and beaten from the roughest game they had ever played.
But the last second was still at hand.
So tired they could barely stand.
Infiltration was harder in the sand.
Outnumbered three to one and,
With the storm they could fade,
Into the distance for a surprise
The opponents would suspect a compromise,
But only too late would they realize,
They had lost the prize.

Word count: 135

mmm

 
Second Place
# 3
1

We.......All...........Must........Remember...Don’t..........Run.......Slow
Try.......To...........Get..........That.............Play.............Each......Pitch
But.......Keep.......Flies.........Falling.........Around........Foul.......Line
We’re...Playing....Without....Short...........Stop............And........Drive
Sinking..Hardball..Dropping....Is...............Taunting.......Our........Batter
In..........Each........Game......The.............Opponents...Hit.........Runs
Last.......Inning......Baseballs.Worst.........Pitcher.........Comes...Home!

Word count: 49
Please do not critique my entry.

If you read across,then down, it has a happy ending, but I won't tell you how to live your life.

 
Third Place
# 4
By Anni (Score: 6.183)
1

Two or three, maybe four or five.
Even teams, they all will strive.
A time limit, a theme to stick.
Make mine a double and please, make it quick.

Time constraints they make you rush.
Enemies, there are none here.
Always helpful and sincere.
My team mates are ones that I hold dear.

Talent abounds on my team.
Evilly, I know we'll win.
Attempts by the others,
Meh, they can't even begin.

Time ticks away.
Enjoy a delay.
Almost at the buzzer
My team's set to play.

Talent
Energy
Awesome
Masters

These are the things that come to mind.
Each and every single time.
Always they come and make a show.
My Worthians, them, you must know.

Word count: 117
 
5
By robfrost (Score: 5.857)
2

Confidence and strength succumb to hopelessness and fatigue.
A once well fought battle has almost reached a bitter defeat.
But hope rests in the hand of a friend.
Teamwork will always win out in the end.

Word count: 36

the night is darkest just before the dawn

 

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