Poetry Tournament Stage 1 - Forms: Etheree

Poetry Tournament Stage 1 - Forms: Etheree

(This contest is part of the Tournament.)
Ten lines of decreasing length
Contest ended 1 year ago 3/21/2011 12:00:00 AM EDT

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  • Cost: 10 credits
  • Jackpot: 100 credits

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First Place
# 1
By Whalelight (Score: 7.499)
12

Come
And rest.
Shut your eyes
From the anguish
Of forgotten days,
Once brilliant as the sun.
Of slowly fading faces,
Dim ghosts in the candlelit night.
Undress and leave that heavy body.
It was not meant to ride on angels' wings.

Word count: 42
 
Second Place
# 2
By BonnySaintAndrew (Score: 7.359)
4

I run below a moonlit winter sky,
The freezing wind is clean, fresh and new,
Cold dark alive with midnight scent,
And grass wet with silver dew.
Muscles singing with the
Promise of the kill,
And night's glory.
But my thoughts -
Pure, raw,
Red.

Word count: 44
 
Third Place
# 3
By icepigs (Score: 6.954)
5

Earth
Just a
Pale Blue Dot
In the vast sky
And on this small stage
Blood is shed for glory
Imagined self-importance
The follies of human conceits
But we must learn to share this planet
It's the only home we have ever known

Word count: 43

This is based off of Carl Sagan's Reflections

 
4
By zannahb (Score: 6.808)
4

It's
Thursday,
Just before
Dawn slips fleshy
Fingers of light through
Slits in grey mini blinds.
Clock radio predicts dire
Economic trends. I swallow
Two Excedrin and ponder how raw
Coconut meat would taste in Tahiti.

Word count: 36
 
5
By Jujubie (Score: 6.768)
2

Low clouds scudding across the horizon
Winter’s cold front loosening its grip
Formations of geese northward bound
Crocus peeking through the snow
Windows briefly opened
Icicles melting
Rushing water
Birds in song
High sun
Spring

Word count: 35
 
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6
By sk (Score: 6.715)
1

The venerable man looks at his life.
A life of adventure and passion,
of fulfillment and happiness.
And yet, as the end draws near,
he cannot help but cry
as suddenly he
realizes

that he is


out of




time

Word count: 39
 
7
By Matoogs (Score: 6.69)
2

Patience pays off as you cross the threshold,
my discovery is imminent.
Hiding in anticipation,
I cannot help but help you.
Lending a guiding hand
as you blindly search,
my voice cries out:
Getting warm...
Warmer...
...Hot.

Word count: 37
 
5

Cry.
Your tears
taste of salt
and leave wet tracks
streaming down your face.
Sometimes moms must say no.
So, cry if you have to, but
your tears won't make me change my mind.
I am completely unaffected.
Except I want to hug you and cry too.

Word count: 47
 
9
By Zonagirl (Score: 6.599)
6

Left
Alone
Abandoned
All by my self
With no companion
How long 'till they return?
A week? A month? A lifetime?
In solitude I yearn for them
My tail wags in anticipation
At last! Familiar footsteps at the door

Word count: 39
 
10
By Sumax1 (Score: 6.414)
2

*Sigh*
There is
A point of
No return when
Plunging into the
whirlpool of a problem
Can seem the better option
Than once more procrastinating
In a quagmire of mud, or drowning
In a sea of doubt and sheer ignorance.

Word count: 40
 

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