Poetry Tournament Stage 2 - The Nature of Things

Poetry Tournament Stage 2 - The Nature of Things

(This contest is part of the Tournament.)
There is no such thing as a boring sunset.
Contest ended 1 year ago 3/31/2011 12:00:00 AM EDT

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  • Cost: 10 credits
  • Jackpot: 100 credits

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First Place
# 1
By Lemmiwinks (Score: 7.932)
7

An icy mountain’s where my life began
Locked in a glacier colored barely blue
Until the sunlight cracked the frozen span
And set adrift a berg on her debut

My journey took me south into the sea
Where warmth released me from my home of frost
To be a single droplet floating free
Above the ocean- lonely, cold and lost

A friendly summer breeze gave me a ride
And delicately set me on the shore
For days I danced within the tropic tide
The push and pull of waves my daily chore

A western wind came by to quench his thirst
Collecting ocean mist into the sky
Swept up, I was alone again at first
But others huddled in as we soared high

Within the dampened group we held on tight
But thunder shook us with his angry call
So one by one, releasing from the height
As lightning cracked her whip to start the squall

Our violent journey ended on the ground
The arid earth began to drink us in
We nourished roots as tiny life was drowned
We coaxed young seeds to wake up and begin

Since then, I've seen and done so many things
As steam, as mist, as ice and gentle rains
Through frozen winters, warmly melting springs
I course through mother nature's aging veins

Word count: 219
 
Second Place
# 2
6

As twilight gently touches crystal skies
The dances of the spirits fill the nights,
And time on time I fall into your eyes -
The burning beauty of the northern lights.

Upon a bleak and cold north wind she glows
And flows, a pulsing drape of greens and reds.
The arctic landscape of my heart she froze;
My soul is hers as midnight wings she spreads.

But as I hold my breath, a thousand stars
like shards of shattered glass they fill the skies
With piercing memories of ancient scars,
And time on time I fall into your lies.

O northern lights in wounded hearts you dwell,
But with the dawn Aurora breaks your spell.

Word count: 114

A sonnet inspired by the aurora borealis.

 
Third Place
# 3
By zannahb (Score: 7.446)
5

A cloudless sky, a boundless sea
let Luna rise at perigee
sequestered from sere scenery,
milk-faced, imbued with dignity,
an anchoress who's captured by
the liquid cloister of my eye.

Then, sudden strange polarity,
she changes with celerity,
her radiant ferocity
confronts my curiosity.
On sea-breath, salt as human tears,
an ancient call rings in my ears.

And I, her willing votary,
dive deep into the mystery
of feral femininity
unconquered through the centuries.
Baptized in silver light I spy
the Goddess in her single eye.

Word count: 86
 
4
By krissielis (Score: 6.85)
1

Growth
not marrow or bone, but sinew
stretching from twine to trellis
wound in tight coils or falling loose and untidy
never ceasing
feeding on sun rays and dead things in the dirt

Creatures
minute organisms in rows on vines
digging and spitting
they poison and nourish
lounging on broad ferns or dill weed
battling enormous foes

Shade
dappled and dusky
bending the light
meandering through limbs and leaves
life hibernates within its thrall
darkness takes away its edge

Woman
mottled by sunspots and curved with age
crouching in dirt enriched by worms
she hums with bees
discovering weeds
whispering to her friends as she picks through their beds

Word count: 109
 
5
By mennufer (Score: 6.839)
2

Air thick with dust in stifling heat,
Exhaustion drags down beating hooves.
Down from the north to water meet,
The flowing mass of lowing moves.

Old nudge the young to break their thirst
Aware of panting death in wait.
Sweet water fills 'til bellies burst;
Clawed fury yearns to hunger sate.

Red dusk gives way to fearsome dark,
Soon bowels quake in icy fear.
Souls lost, alone become her mark,
Her furtive steps draw ever near.

She rushes over the sun-cracked earth
heart pounds
legs push
jaws crush
slash
scream
thrash
death

life

Word count: 93
 
6
By suomigirl (Score: 6.749)
1

The wind she tells an eerie tale,
A tender song of dark and light,
Of tragedy of love and loss,
She whispers softly through the night.

So silently the ocean weeps
For lives who lie in watery grave,
In sadness keeps their secrets safe,
To shadows of the past he's slave.

The sun she sings a joyous song,
Of spirits dancing on the sea
Who ride on waves like diamond dust;
A thousand souls at last set free.

With trident gleaming he strides forth
'Cross Neptune's realm he casts his gaze,
Since time began through peace and war,
Unchanging 'til the end of days.

Word count: 104
 
7
By 6feetunder (Score: 6.709)
0

Through the tangles of her golden hair slips the gentle sea breeze.
On her burdened mind is the shame of a fall from grace.
Her pupils shrink at the setting sun sinking into the tranquil sea.
Streaming from blue eyes flow endless salty tears;
She lowers her heavy lids, but fails to contain them.

From afar she hears the wailing of distant sirens approaching.
She drowns their summoning call with a shell pressed to her ear.
Her lips stretch, forming a defeated smile born from acceptance.
On the tip of her silent tongue is a secret that she’ll keep.
In her mouth is the taste of blood from her chewed inner cheek.

The surrounding air reeks of rotting death delivered by the tides.
It leaves a lump in her throat and makes her downy hair rise.
Across her naked flesh dance the warm hues of the sun’s fading light.
They bathe her torso with a misleading radiant glow,
For deep within her tender core, she is shivering.

Clinging to her slender legs hang countless grains of sand, drying, falling.
Around her ankle wraps a lingering strand of kelp.
Over her feet lap transient ripples from the rising tide.
Between her toes are tiny pebbles trapped, yet soon to be set free.
And with her fading ephemeral shadow, slips the essence of Eve.

Word count: 222
 
8
By figmentt (Score: 6.268)
1

Hail, sleet, snow and freezing rain
Cause me trouble, cause me pain
Shov'ling makes my back strain
My vacation's down the drain

Sleet, hail, freezing rain and snow
AAA, I need a tow
Where is spring? I sure don't know
Looking for some grass to mow

Freezing rain, sleet, snow and hail
Makes me want to cry and wail
Hope some day to see my mail
Dented cars will be on sale

Snow, freezing rain, hail and sleet
Everywhere is a white sheet
I am hoping for some heat
Winter weather has me beat!

Word count: 94
 
9
By Merbley (Score: 6.142)
1

Light
shooting
across the
ebony sky
flares for a moment
and then is gone, vanished.
Stars sparkle in the heavens,
looking down from eternity
at the one who so fleetingly burned
a blazing trail of life through the darkness.

Word count: 39
 
10
By Pendragon (Score: 6.048)
2

Slumbering now.
Beneath Winter's cowl,
soldiers of Fall
hear reveille's call.

Campaign's begun.
The heat of the sun
stripping away
the final delay.

The mustered troops
from crannies and stoops
gather around
with rustling sound.

The march begins
commanded by Winds,
skirmishing hard
across the backyard.

Doing his share
by ruling the air,
Maple will lead,
a whirlwind of seed.

Out on the flank
in rank upon rank,
Willow Tree whips
his soldiers in strips.

Stoic old Pine
will stately decline.
No needles sent
in peaceful dissent.

The oak and beech
now twirl to reach
a quiet site
to sit out the fight.

From neighbor's land
the elm leaves demand
to join the fray
for places to stay.

All is for naught,
for they've all been caught.
By end of day
Dad's raked them away.

Word count: 135

Each stanza is 4,5,4,5 syllables with aabb ccdd rhyming. I have no idea if this is an actual poetic form.

 

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