Poetry Tournament Stage 4 - Writer's Choice

Poetry Tournament Stage 4 - Writer's Choice

(This contest is part of the Tournament.)
Eight well-crafted works of art, culminating in this.
Contest ended 1 year ago 4/20/2011 12:00:00 AM EDT

Contest Info

  • Cost: 10 credits
  • Jackpot: 100 credits

Contest Options

rss
 
 
First Place
# 1
By Sumax1 (Score: 8.019)
5

I woke from sleep one winter night.
My heart was beating fast, with fright.
The room was cold, though glowing bright.
A shadow moved into the light.

It came toward me in my bed.
“Be not afraid,” the shadow said.
Then, as my fear turned into dread,
The blackened form began to spread.

A figure then formed in its place,
And of the shadow left no trace.
He raised his arms with flowing grace,
And drew the hood back from his face.

The eyes were gentle, warm and calm.
His icy fingers touched my arm
And, as I drew back in alarm,
His voice seduced me with its charm.

“Before your birth, we set a date
When you would return to the gate
And now you must accept your fate
To reckon debts upon your slate.”

His smile was warm and lacking blame
And, since I knew from whence he came,
The frightening figure now seemed tame.
He drew his list to check my name.

The name he mentioned was not mine!
I felt a tingle in my spine.
“You’re wrong,” I ventured to opine,
“There’s some mistake in the design.”

His kindly face showed shocked surprise,
Truth registered in his wise eyes.
He proceeded to apologise.
Then I began to realise

That I had grown to love this man,
This gentle, calming, guardian.
I begged him disregard the ‘Plan’
And “Take me with you, if you can.”

He warmly hugged me to his chest
And said, “Please do not be distressed.”
He told me now to get some rest
And forget that he had been my guest.

When I questioned his identity,
“I’m the Reaper,” he said, quietly.
“When you’ve fulfilled your destiny,
You’ll have reason to remember me.”

Word count: 295
 
Second Place
# 2
By zannahb (Score: 7.629)
6

Last year,
April arrived
in sensible shoes,
encased like a sausage
in a coarse muslin apron
and thick elastic stockings,
carrying a spade over her shoulder
and a trowel in her hand
like somebody's grandmother,
ready to set tomatoes.

But this year,
she appeared all sultry-like,
squishing mud through her toes,
each step sounding like a
wet, smacking kiss.
She trod a sinuous path,
artfully avoiding
sprouting grass shoots,
shedding rainbow scarves
promiscuously
into the balmy air,
smiling when they
dissolved into rings of daisies
as they embraced the earth.
Her firm brown belly bulged
with silent laughter
at our astonishment.

Word count: 101
 
Third Place
# 3
By BonnySaintAndrew (Score: 7.46)
5

Dear Boss,

They call me Saucy Jack, I think it's most unfair -
I'm not some common ruffian from a gin soaked harlot's lair!
I do not cut them quickly, and I do not cut them slow,
My work requires an expertise, to be performed just so.
A quick slice in the darkness; well, it wouldn't do, you see?
A butcher's floor is not the place for an artisan like me.

Dear Boss, I hope you understand - for myself, I am aware,
That time is passing all too fast, and I have so much more to share.
I'm getting better all the time at this lovely work I do,
Next time I'll take the lady's ears and I'll post them straight to you!
Or maybe something nicer that might do you for a treat?
A strumpet's heart or liver, that would certainly be sweet!

Oh Boss, I know you'll do your best to catch me if you can,
But where do you begin, old chap? You can't know who I am!
Or why I do these things I do, and just what might be my aims?
Well, you'll have to wait like all the rest for my funny little games,
Grand work the last job was, Dear Boss, she had no time to squeal,
The next one will be better yet, I have plans I won't reveal.

They say I am a surgeon; then they say I am a thief,
It doesn't matter in the end, well at least that's my belief,
Ha Ha! Today the papers say Her Majesty's my mother -
Dear Boss, my knife is nice and sharp, and I'm keen to do another.
I'll cut them up, and dice them up and I'll fry them like a kipper!
My work has only just begun -

Yours Truly,
Jack The Ripper.

Word count: 301

Inspiration: The infamous Dear Boss letter, received by Scotland Yard, London, on 29 September 1888.

 
3

"Dad, it's time," my son said "to go,
to make my mark upon the world."
"Tell me your plan," I said, and sighed
"The wind is right, my sail unfurled.

I'm off to sail all the wild seas
no compass to bind my living."
"But we must plan to start aright."
"I will but move to ocean's swing

"No net or line to cast ashore
If life sends you into the shoals?"

"Do you not trust what you have taught?
I'll sink or swim or reach my goals.

I know to scrimp and save my coin
give my hand and heart without end.
The truth I'll speak or hold my tongue
Make deep my roots and yet still bend.

I will measure twice and cut once
not turn back until my work's done.
It's time old man to let me go.
I'll be fine, am I not your son?"

Now he's packed and ready to go.
I look and see myself and curse,
In my day I too knew it all.
and thinking back was likely worse.

He's my son, and by all that's true,
The world will never be the same.
So off he goes, no plan or thought
To live his life and make his name.

I watch through father's secret tears
I feel my heart both burst and break.
I pray that in the coming years
I learn what God and I did make.

Word count: 239
 
Share
Sponsored by MsgtBob
5
By taite (Score: 6.47)
2

they say that god wants us to be dust
but I can’t believe that’s true
I’ve always thought of a cigarette as a bet -
can you breathe in its dissolution
without becoming its demise?
on the sidewalk, cracking like
the bedraggled earth, where
all the gum becomes gray eventually
but the orange rims still shine
and remind you of the sunrise
you blocked out with your laughter

the sky on a dirty day in the city
that never sleeps or snubs
(or chokes on its own spit)
almost looks like a drag
from a set of charred lips
and your body, I’m sorry to say,
looked like an ashtray to me

Word count: 111

:) :( :?

 
6
By KatDanson (Score: 6.413)
5

I tell you all my secrets
I know they're safe with you
I share my hopes and dreams
And all my wishes, too
Whenever I feel angry
Or hurt or have a fright
I know that you will be there
To tell me it's all right

And when you need a shoulder
Or just a helping hand
Then I'm the one you come to
l always understand
I'm here when you are happy
And also when you're sad
I share in all your triumphs
And calm you when you're mad

As we grew up together
Together we will stay
And even if you marry
Or ever go away
You know I'll always be here
Just call or message me
And I will come a-running
As quickly as can be

There's no one else who could be
As good a friend as you
For when it comes to friendship
You're the best -- it's true!

Word count: 153
 
7
By Merbley (Score: 6.026)
2

My life,
Not what I'd planned.
Dreams fade, then die
As reality sets in.

My life,
Not a perfect picture.
Imperfect decisions, challenges
Mar the landscape.

My life,
Not what I'd wanted.
Dreams gone, replaced,
Creating a new reality.

My life,
Not what I'd planned,
But somehow better,
Real, true - mine.

Word count: 51
 
8
By suomigirl (Score: 5.927)
4

In times of old, where the legend began,
Where magical beasts lived at one with man.
From his roost in the mountains he could fly
With the ravens black, the kings of the sky.

His eyes are bright as the moon in the night,
His wings cast a shadow that blocks the light,
When he takes to the air folks stop and stare -
But beware, man turns to stone with his glare.

His scales of leather protect him from harm,
The fire of his breath causes great alarm
When it lights up the twilight and the dawn,
And the dragon, Lord of beasts, he was born.

The men they came with their swords and their spears,
A dragon they slayed to relieve the fears
Of the towns people who believed the tale
Which they heard as children, dragons' betrayal.

With tears of sadness they flew 'cross the land,
Revenge for the death to the men they'd hand.
With their bright talons gleaming in the sun,
It was certain that the war had begun.

The war was fought, many losses of life
Of dragons and men, but the final knife
By the hand of a man the beast did fall
As away the beaten dragons did crawl.

From the realms of mortals the dragons did flee
As many young warriors danced with glee,
A sad song of prophecy could be heard,
Of the fall of man in time was their word.

Word count: 240

With this being 'writer's choice' I wanted to do something a little different with the meter. Written in iambic tetrameter with a changing pattern of anapestic feet. I hope you like it!

 

Related Contests

14 entries
12 entries
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
24 entries
30 entries