Ode To Worthians 4

Ode To Worthians 4

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
Contest ended 8 months ago 10/1/2011 12:00:00 AM EDT

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First Place
# 1
By juliarisca (Score: 6.697)
8

Zero is what I would be without him
Every time he speaks I hear the sound of the cherubim
Calm is how he makes me feel with just a simple kiss
Actually, he is the one I will marry
Relationship with him is nothing scary
Ideal is coexistence with him and live this bliss
Ordinary is something he will a never be
Couple is what we are, everyone agree
And I never loved like this

Word count: 75

This is an ode to my fiancee, who is also a worthian. And it's my first time writing in a non-native language. I had some fun learning a bit more of english.

 
Second Place
# 2
By KawaiiMelon (Score: 6.333)
6

Kindheartedly, you are able to be both beautiful and hilarious simultaneously
Amazing, your personality happens to be
Watch, I do, as your charming personality and looks sway me towards happiness
As I write this anecdote, I sway over your every move
I cannot believe how adorable you are
In the event of your death, I will be by your side
My uncontrollable lust over you is overtaking me
Everyday at school, I must control my crush over ye,
Like many inspirational peoples, I must go now
Oh, how I love you.
No one man self-lusts as much as I...

Word count: 99
 
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Third Place
# 3
By juliarisca (Score: 5.979)
3

Perhaps she shall never see this small tribute
Perfect will be if she thinks cute
8 is the number of kisses that I send to her
Mostly this poem will make her smile
Resourcefulness is what she has because of her style
Quality is what she has been as a photographer

Word count: 51

I was happy to write this ode, and it's my second time writing something in english.

 
4
By WVJim (Score: 5.934)
4

Worthians, my skill
is captured in my rhyming
its worth is unknown

oriental verse
isn’t that hard to create
if one pays it heed

”˜tis all in the form
syllables five, seven, five
simple, yet complex

can you remember
when last I posted to Worth?
even I forget

I’m back, I return
to grace the site once again
hello, Worthians!

vote or do not vote
I really do not care which
my job is to write

just think about this
when chastising me this time
don’t hike me … haiku

Word count: 89
 
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Oh Worthians my heart doth soar
The illustrations never bore.

Wordsmithing how it lightens page
And fills my mind like a Worthy sage.

The photo chops show all your Worth
The skills and knowledge have no girth.

I shan’t forget all the Worthy rest
Voting makes my heart feel blessed.

I love thee love thee a thousand ways!
My amorousness, it ever stays.

Word count: 63

Wisconsin cheese.

 
2

Dear Worthian.

A great idea we all know you had.
But some other Worthians found it kind of sad.
Courage my dear with a computer in front.
Definetly shown through, in your dramatic font.
Every other Worthian cares deeply.
For you, writing poems so caring and weepily.
Good news it seems.
Happiness broke through its gracious seams.
I love you fellow Worthian, don't deny.
Just spread your wings with me, and learn to fly.
Kindness is found in writing.
Love and soul, have been seen in your posting.
My heart bleeds to see your entry.
Next time, maybe it wont seem to take a century.
Over turn your last couple of pages.
prfectly, your work will appear throughout the ages.
Quietly is the way your works should be read.
Ringing in my ears, till all other noise has fled.
Straight to vote as soon as I am able.
Tough choices dont even make it to the table.
Unbelievable how great your post is doing.
Victory can be seen, curteouly, dominance is ensuing.
Winning this battle will be easy.
Xavier's post was rather sleazy!
You know not much farther to win.
Zachary has told me this poem is FIN.

Sincerely: Fellow Worthian.

Word count: 201
 
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With a snap shot a medal is won, to who its given is the winner and to who is not is the failed one. But there is no much more than experience that lies in your work and a good eye will set the pace to the photo of this race.

With a tap on the pad or a pencil in your hand comes words of wisdom and willingness to the few that interest themselves in the writing of the willing. That which lies in your mind and rots away will always be, unless set in place to those who read it just in case.

To the handy at art and a different touch lies the work of an artist who is too much in doubt. To draw or to paint, to mold or put in place, is it ever good enough is the question to be, but that’s up to the people ho will see.

Effects can be effected and to be effected you must change; shape and color is always the way. To trick the eyes or just tell a little lie, its always a win win. But be prepared for something better or prepare for something worse, as long as you don’t take your work to curse.

So in all of us the talents creep, and to be put to the test we will never doubt, but to win is not the answer and the answer is not to be won, but the prize of the willing and talented will always be fun.

Word count: 256
 

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