Bonus: Poetry - Halloween 2!

Bonus: Poetry - Halloween 2!

Trick or treat!
Contest ended 6 months ago 11/11/2011 12:00:00 AM EDT

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First Place
# 1
By Bellabenyola (Score: 6.719)
2

He was only nine
And she had just turned eight
He saw her walking home from school
Her hair bright red and straight
The two of them they laughed and played
And became a friendly pair
The bell would ring and he would run
And see her waiting there
Every day he saw her
She always looked the same
A little white dress with a big red bow
And a necklace with her name.
One day when he got home from school
He told his mom about her
Describing what she looked like
And how they met each other
His mother was frightened beyond belief
And so she began to scream
For this was the girl she’d read about
Who a year ago drowned in a stream

Word count: 127

"Hey ma, I see dead people!" ;)

 
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Second Place
# 2
2

There is a day, this time each year
When children roam, and grown-ups fear
Afraid to see, afraid to hear
It's Halloween you know.

The howls and shrieks from tiny chords
Makes adult bravery go-by-the boards
Driving some out-of-their-gourds
It's Halloween you know.

Little Mary, she's a ghoul
Little Kevin, a zombie cruel
Aliens locked in a deadly duel
It's Halloween you know.

It's all in fun, no need to worry
Children running in a hurry
This time of night, the frightful scurry
It's Halloween you know.

Then stillness comes 'neath darkness dome
The streets are empty where they roam
When all the monsters have gone home
It's Halloween you know.

Shrieks and giggles, now died down
A quiet rests upon the town
Another year 'til it comes back around.
It's Halloween you know.

Word count: 134

Halloween is my birthday so I know it well.

 
Third Place
# 3
By mbraynard (Score: 6.287)
1

Once again it's Hallows' eve, when we are dressed up to deceive.
This year I have been invited to party at an estate.
With women dressed in skimpy clothes, another night you'd think them hoes.
We'll dance all night till sun arose, we drink and smoke and celebrate.
I'll wear the mask, not hesitate.

The time to dress up has arrived, I'll put it on, I will survive.
It's just a piece of plastic with a band to hold it straight.
There's nothing there for me to fear, when to my face it will adhere,
No big deal, just once a year, its' just a mask, nothing to hate,
But not just now, I'll think I'll wait.

Mask in hand, I leave my home, in near November's cold I roam.
I'll finalize my costume dress when I reach the entrance gate.
For now I will not wear my mask so in the fresh air my face can bask,
That's the reason, if you ask, for I'm not afraid, do not debate,
I'll put it on at the estate.

I have arrived, I'm at the door, there's a toy crow screaming "nevermore!"
I have no fear and put it on, my face this mask now decorates.
See there, I'm fine, now time to meet my friends in costumes, some just sheets.
One in purple, is he a beet? I see monkey or some primate,
And a wealthy sultan from Kuwait!

I sense a claustrophobic threat which I dismiss, which I forget.
I own this mask, it doesn't own me, rising tension I negate.
Ignore my growing beads of sweat, under the mask my face is wet.
Wait, who is that, that young brunette? Dressed just like a Playboy playmate!
I'll get her number, I'll get a date!

"Why hello, I sure like your style! Come over here and chat a while."
I don't delay when a girl is near, I will not make her wait.
Yet as I'm trying to acquaint, I'm breathing heavy, feeling faint.
The mask becomes a harsh constraint. "Excuse me miss," I placate.
"The bathroom I must now locate."

My heaving breath sounds like a roar inside the mask, I can take no more.
I rush outside, run through the door, with rapid beats my heart palpates.
Under the mask my face burns hot, my head is a boiling teapot.
I'm not sure if I'll live or not, I think that I'll suffocate,
If from this mask I don't escape.

I'm now outside where I am free, having just left my friends' party,
I tear the mask right off of me, no longer am I its inmate.
I destroy the evil disguise so it may not antagonize
Me under such a friendly guise as helping to celebrate
The Devil's day, 'twas my mistake.

Word count: 466

This tale of claustrophobia is a tribute the original horror poet, Edgar Allen Poe. I have the same rhyme and rhythm scheme as he did in his poem, "Nevermore," except I cut the fifth catalectic line from each stanza.

 
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By MagniPflanzwow (Score: 5.291)
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Witches, Ghouls,
Goblins and Gremlins-
Running rampant,
Through the icy October night.

Ogres, Trolls,
Old ugly hags-
Whether dead,
Or Dying,
All with candy bags.

Witches, Demons,
Crackling and moaning-
Zombies, Skeletons,
Undead all groaning.

When the sun goes down,
The fun keeps going-
Whether it's a juggling clown,
Or sweet tooth aching.

All the scary creatures,
Having a blast-
It seems it will never end,
But we know it won't last.

Word count: 72

First poem, hope it fits the cut.

 
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Nicholas Blood on Halloween
you and your lover in fields of green
her large stature like gold for you
fupa fupa fupa, fupadeedoo.
trick or treat
as you smell her feet
its like perfect perfume
for your heart in bloom.
potato potato lips
choco choco hips
rebuff me boo
you dirty fish
i beesech you
you smell like fish
fin

Word count: 60
 

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