arsidubu vs. hbomb

arsidubu vs. hbomb

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Contest ended 7 years ago 1/11/2005 12:00:00 AM EDT

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  • Cost: 10 credits
  • Jackpot: 10 credits

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First Place
# 1
By hbomb (Score: 7.537)
24

If I loved you any harder, would the world turn red
A million sunsets bursting in my head?
If I held you any tighter, would the world turn grey
Committing the cosmos to this one perfect day?

If I kissed you any slower, would the world turn white
Drifting silent into the soft folds of night?
If I missed you any longer, would the world turn blue
With longing drenching my skin like dew?

If I heard your voice more clearly, would the world turn deaf
With only just my touch to sense your breath?
If I watched your face more dearly, would the world turn blind
Only after-images burned hot into my mind?

If I touched your skin more softly, would the world go numb
An eternity of flesh unable to succumb?
If I called your name more loudly, would the world go mute
With the dying stars alone faintly echoing...


...Galoot.

Word count: 153
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2
By arsidubu (Score: 7.47)
21

I have a secret fantasy
of which I'd like to share,
My yearning is for you, Galoot
so suave and debonair.

This dream of being close to you
fires passion deep inside,
The thrill of having real life
and cyberlife collide.

I hope and pray we'll meet someday,
in glorious embrace.
I'll run my fingers through your hair
and kiss your lovely face.

The feelings that I have for you
are boundless as the sea.
To love you is to love the god
of Gen. Stupidity.

Word count: 86
Please do not critique my entry.
 

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