Rhyme Time: Spring

Rhyme Time: Spring

Spring bursts in lovely verse
Contest ended 7 years ago 4/10/2005 12:00:00 AM EDT

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  • Cost: 2 credits
  • Jackpot: 50 credits

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First Place
# 1
9

Tempt me not with warm spring days and outdoor celebrations.

Do not speak of picnics, hikes or similar temptations.

I will not heed the fragrant bloom of Nature's lush seductions.

I'm busy hunting those missing receipts that support my tax deductions.

Word count: 41
 
9

Deep green eyes, distant stare, stiff cold body, flowing hair,
In spring thaw water, ice thin blue, open hole, which they fell through.
Could not save both, life’s unfair, now everyday I say a prayer,
To thank the Lord, my sad dear Sue, your doll is lost, but I still have you.

Word count: 52
 
Third Place
# 3
By sunbearsarah (Score: 5.673)
6

Sun, rain, crocus, dew,
Life and love bound forth anew.
Breeze, sapling, warmth, bud,
Early showers precede the flood.

Word count: 19
 
4
By 6feetunder (Score: 5.609)
6

Autumn’s remains, released from winter’s grasp,
A stick, damp leaves, burnt umber blades of grass,
Rusted locket, and broken necklace clasp,
Renew feelings, I thought had long since passed.

Word count: 29
 
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5
5

My spring is a window two feet square, up on high, from which I hear
A hundred birds in ardent song, urging winter’s chill begone.
Spring sets alight a thousand flames, passion burns; no blame, nor shame.
But for my spring-fire, I lie enchain'd ; the love that dare not speak its name.

*For his proclivities, Oscar Wilde was sentenced to the maximum punishment of two years hard labor at Reading Goal.After his release in 1898, his health and spirit never really returned.He died in Paris on November 30, 1900, poor and alone, and was buried without much ceremony.

Word count: 101
 
6
By Eurydice (Score: 5.537)
3

Wake up, little one, your time has come
to stretch and push against the ground.
Release your treasure, hidden within
and with your beauty, the world astound.

Word count: 27
 
7
By fraser65 (Score: 5.522)
9

A gentle breeze, both warm and wild, breathes sunlit air
With ancient care, as forest heals from winter’s scorn.
Through fallen leaves that autumn wrought, first bluebells sing,
Cry bravely, “Spring!” - And beauty is made new, reborn.

Word count: 37
 
8
By sunbearsarah (Score: 5.492)
4

Morning breaks, unfurl my wings,
Kiss the rain, caress the earth.
Wind rushes by, warm body sings,
Stroll on the grass, dart down the firth.

Word count: 25
 
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9
By GalFisk (Score: 5.485)
5

The sun is warming on my skin, the air is fresh and mild,
the snow is melting quickly and the streams are running wild
Along a gravelled road I find the most delightful thing,
a little yellow flower, the first coltsfoot of the spring.

Word count: 44
 
10
By Muse (Score: 5.479)
4

Did you see the jaws of the tiger lily? Gnashing, snap, snap, snap!
For I wrestled blustery winter and I placed it in her trap.
Did you see the smile of the tiger lily? Gleaming! Dreamy! Beamed!
For next day bright it dawned. Spring was here it seemed.

Word count: 48
 

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