My Personal Paradise by Anni
5th place entry in Paradise

I know a lake, it’s in my mind.
I go and think there all the time.

The gentle breeze, the glowing sun.
I wander there when my day is done.

I relax, by a bubbling brook.
A shaded tree my overlook.

I quietly sit and contemplate,
the life I live, the choices I make.

Each dying day a reminder to me,
that I live in a country, where I was born free.

Each time that I travel, I choose a new place.
To think and relax and enjoy the slow pace.

My days are hectic, they never stop.
Three young children in my family crop.

But my nights are mine, I choose my space.
I travel alone to my special place.

I’m not tied down by money or fate.
My mind alone is my Paradise gate.

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  • Entered: 1/11/2005 10:20:34 PM
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  • Rank: 5/20
  • Votes: 25
  • Score: 6.222
  • Views: 170
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