Why won't you fly ? by DoggySpew
9th place entry in Illo Shortie: Sadness
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Author's Note:

This is a bit of a sad story.

I was waiting for the train at my local trainstation, when I heard a muffled thud behind me.
There, on the ground, lay a small bird who breathes it's last breath. It hit a window.
Just like that, the little bird died, without reason, while I stood there, powerless.

This is for that little bird.

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  • Entered: 4/17/2005 4:44:29 PM
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  • Rank: 9/23
  • Votes: 57
  • Score: 6.046
  • Views: 278
  • Comments: 5

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