Redemption Cloud by Platynews
6th place entry in Illo Shortie: Cloud Shadows
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The smoke from the gun climbed up the sky like the sins of those who hear the shots.... but this one isn't like everyone else, he is just a little unusual father showing to his kid that life has some meaning and that must be enjoyed out of things that can end it!!

The boy started to cry between his father's legs as if the dark cloud over him was his past going away with the wind....it was a lesson that he would never forget.

...i love the feeling of clouds viewed from a plane ... but my artistic habilities don't let me do it justice =(

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  • Sponsor: brunewz
  • Entered: 6/30/2005 8:26:42 PM
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  • Rank: 6/7
  • Votes: 46
  • Score: 5.500
  • Views: 174
  • Comments: 3

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