The Last Days by rsr1264782
9th place entry in The Last Day

OF SCHOOL

To me this is one of the greatest feelings in the world. All the hard work sitting in a classroom for eight hours a day finally payed of as started to walk out the door. But a feeling haunted me. I wouldn't be able to see my friends for a while. My friends are really important and this was the last time I was going to see them for a while. When I got home I still felt excited but, I felt alone. I tried to get the feeling away but it just wouldn't stop.

But I realized something, when graduation time comes, I would be alone even more. Also I would be stressed knowing my life and career are going to start. College, a job, getting a house, a car, all that haunted me. I laid down on my bed thinking of all this. Then I fell asleep


SUMMER VACATION

It was a calm, cold day here in Michigan. The leaves were beginning to fall and it's raining more then ever. But a feeling overwhelmed me that day. I felt so excited knowing that I was going to meet my friends again and also I was happy knowing I got two more years of school. But that wasn't the feeling.

It was like a feeling that I couldn't quite explain. Even though I was excited but I felt as though nothing happened. Time flew so fast and I didn't accomplish anything I wanted to do. One minute I was walking out of the school saying "Finally I am out!" and the next I'm about to walk back inside school. It's like I fell asleep and didn't wake up until now. This feeling haunted me all day.

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  • Entered: 11/28/2006 10:39:36 PM
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  • Score: 3.911
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