One more wish by vermiciousknid

Dear Santa,

I was at the store the other day. The store that is one really big store but there are hundreds of stores in it. Mommy calls that place the mawl.

I don't know if you remember me I had on a dora the exlporer shirt. Anyways santa, there was something I really really wished for, but when I was on your lap, I couldn't remember the name of the place mommy said Daddy will living for a while. Everyone calls it over there but I know that can be under my bed where my peanut butter samich is hiding, or in the litter box where I made that sand castle another day. I am sorry for crying at you. It wasn't your fault. I was crying because I couldn't remember the name of that place. I wanted you to hear my wish really badly. I forget stuff alot, and I can't help it. I know you are so busy on Christmas eve, and I already ruined my wish at the big store, but We are sending you a note today in school and I need one more wish Santa! Please I'll be good all year! I wrote it down, Mommy said it's Iwak, where daddy is. I wanted to ask you to bring my daddy home safe from Iwak, and too Santa I wanted to tell you that Mommy and I can't mail cookies there by Christmas because it takes too long. Daddy likes the ones with the chocolate smashed in the middle, from Freprije Farm.

Love,
The girl from the mawl with the dora shirt on.

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  • Entered: 12/19/2006 9:07:25 AM
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