Absence by Calaveras

We shared one life so long ago;
The void you left remains unfilled.
My sole bedmate a cold pillow,
We shared one life so long ago.
My friends pity the sad widow,
Believing all my passion stilled.
We shared one life so long ago;
The void you left remains unfilled.


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Considering it's only five unique lines, this was a lot harder than I thought it would be! :)

Good luck everyone.

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  • Entered: 3/6/2007 7:16:26 PM
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