Lessons From Birds by Mister_IQ
1st place entry in H?H: Admin Text Challenge

chickadees in the ash
robins in the pine
sparrows in the oak

tiny little pairs flitter
in the air, a busy cloud

beds of bright green moss worked from a sidewalk crack
bowls of long-stomped mud, cool and smoothly packed
piles of chaos, feathers grass and plastic wrap
each molds a home from nothing

stopping only to sing
dusk brings pause
to announce the joy of being

chickadees in the ash
robins in the pine
sparrows in the oak

and then
fragile globes
life

silky smooth spots on a milkdrop
tiny gems the color of sky
a soap bubble rolled in the dirt
treasures beyond price

always one warming, one warding
not affording one moment of sleep
without an eye open

and then
tiny movements

mouths the size of heads
heads the size of pebbles
world the size of call, eat, sleep
but that's big enough for now

for chickadees in the ash
robins in the pine
sparrows in the oak

icy needles poke through cracks
in bowls of moss and mud smooth-packed.
piles of chaos don't hold back
invaders seeking
scrabbling at the door

shadows passing quickly
tiny bodies thin and sickly
beg for warmth no more

all those hours of loving care
swept into the early morning
sit and sing to mourn, to share
a loss

heads cocked and straightened
minds shocked and weighted
with the dream of family

then gone, to a secret place of sorrow
back, in only days
fly again

tiny little pairs flitter
in the air, a busy cloud
try again

chickadees in the ash.
robins in the pine.
sparrows in the oak.

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  • Sponsor: cakeladybarb
  • Entered: 5/23/2007 5:09:38 PM
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