First Time by Eurydice
7th place entry in H?H: Admin Text Challenge

- Oh, but I'm scared.

- Don't be afraid, you'll love it!

- But..., but... what if I'm no good?

- You'll be fine. Don't worry.

- I don't know what to do.

- Just follow my lead, do like I do. You'll want to do it all the time afterwards, you'll see.

- But... but...

- Come on now, don't be such a baby, besides... you know you wanna!

So, with great trepidation, I took the leap of no return.

At first a feeling of dread, of spiraling down into emptiness.

Then I started to push, up... down... up... down... in a great rhythmic motion.

I started to rise.

I started to soar.

Wow! I can't believe this, it's awesome! Oooohhhh! OOOooohhhh! OOOOOooooohhhh!

Whoosh! Whoosh! Whoosh!

A little bird's first time flying

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  • Sponsor: sk
  • Entered: 5/28/2007 1:59:28 PM
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  • Rank: 7/11
  • Votes: 26
  • Score: 6.516
  • Views: 225
  • Comments: 11

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