Lying awake by acowen
12th place entry in Bonus: Poetry - Monorhyme 2

My whole world is turning blue
The clock slips slowly past two
As I lie here all I think of is you
I can’t sleep if you only knew
And when doctor said the cancer grew
I wished so much it was untrue
It was barely in remission too
I can’t understand why He took you
But someone so strong is among the few
You fought much longer than I could do
I’m sorry for everything you went through
But you gave me a new point of view
And with love always true
I want to say thank you

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  • Entered: 6/17/2009 12:05:54 AM
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  • Votes: 22
  • Score: 6.110
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