A Verse Most Repetitious by Brendan
2nd place entry in Bonus: Poetry - Monorhyme 2

"Help!" Mama cried, her voice not surreptitious.
I fetched my rifle, thinking it judicious
and ran outside, my manner expeditious.

"I saw a werewolf!" Mama said. "So vicious
and with a face so ugly and pernicious
I think we can assume it was malicious!"

Now, normally I'm not too superstitious,
believing ghouls and ghosts to be fictitious.
Also, her breath smelled just a tad suspicious.

"Forgive me, Mama, if I sound seditious.
I know you're quite convinced that rum's nutritious,
but three bottles by noon seems, well ... ambitious."

Word count: 88
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  • Entered: 6/22/2009 6:01:40 PM
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  • Votes: 22
  • Score: 7.794
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  • Comments: 13

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