The Guard Named Reality by Checker
23rd place entry in Bonus: Poetry - Monorhyme 2

Please calm me now, for the deep fear is here
The austere guard has abandoned his post, now a breach to my ears
His main objective was forfeiting reality, protection always was near
I've known no words would get past, not for decades beyond years

But now he's gone, slowly failed, he's dissolved, disappeared
He can't fight off your words, my heart's barrier is seared
Inducing the untempered hot fall, a suited army of scorched tears
Left alone is the filtered memory, now a last souvenir

Intertwined sense knows the real problem, it's your words that I leer
Spilling profusely from your mouth, your disputations interfered
I won't replace the guard, his position is cleared
The guard will be obsolete, for someone worthy to hear

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  • Entered: 6/23/2009 10:43:59 PM
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  • Votes: 22
  • Score: 4.795
  • Views: 263
  • Comments: 6

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