Fatalle Attraction by Juicer
8th place entry in Film Noir
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She slowly sipped her bitter black coffee, but her eyes never left me, it's as though she could see right through me, know every detail of the betrayal I was contemplating. No blink, no twitch, just the piercing stare of those beautiful but deadly blue eyes.

Did she know, could she know? One thing I knew for sure, I couldn't look away, one weak moment and she'd know for sure.....

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  • Entered: 8/16/2009 12:48:31 PM
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  • Rank: 8/28
  • Votes: 47
  • Score: 6.599
  • Views: 252
  • Comments: 8

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