Moi... Lolita by dalizee
11th place entry in Bonus: Song title poetry

There was a girl, not too young, not too old
Wearing a dress when outside was cold
When a man saw her and he started to like her
She saw he was standing a little bit closer
So she told him "hey mister, you are too old"

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  • Entered: 9/22/2009 7:04:35 PM
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