Iron Man by batchmasters
12th place entry in Bonus: Song title poetry

Try escaping if you can
for I am called the Iron Man
My heart burns hot like fired coals
I'm here collecting rotten souls
Let's take a look, yours don't seem right
you sweat too much, you're so uptight
you stink of lies and silly fears
and what's with all the bloody tears
Please do man up or you won't do well
in the smokey red hot depths of hell.

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  • Entered: 9/26/2009 11:44:20 PM
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  • Rank: 12/13
  • Votes: 16
  • Score: 5.264
  • Views: 305
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