A Pirate's Grave by penguin54
3rd place entry in Hilarious Headstones 3

Captain Jack was a scurvy dog,
Who sure did drink a lot of grog.
With all the danger pirates face,
He should have died with noble grace.
But instead of meeting his demise,
While fighting other ruthless guys,
Or being lost to the deep stormy seas,
He passed on land from liver disease.

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my first attempt at a writing submission

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  • Sponsor: Jujubie
  • Entered: 10/10/2009 7:12:10 PM
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  • Rank: 3/24
  • Votes: 27
  • Score: 6.805
  • Views: 258
  • Comments: 3

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