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Author's Note: Freddy Krueger: http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs9/i/2006/010/8/1/Freddy_Kruger_by_dInmIn.jpg
Bedroom: http://www.vacationrentalsnicaragua.com/vacationrentalsnicaragua/Casa%207%20-%20interior%20master%20bedroom%20at%20night.JPG
Sitting girl: http://cache2.asset-cache.net/xc/sb10062830d-001.jpg
One, two, Freddy's coming for you
Three, four, better lock your door
Five, six, grab a crucifix
Seven, eight, gonna stay up late
Nine, ten, never sleep again