Please critique this entry!
Author's Note: "That's all? I got some more for ya..."
First I wanted him to be super-sayian, but I barely made it to normal state in time...
Background picture found via google, taken by Prof. Dr. Nils Paar:
http://www.phy.hr/~npaar/photos/tokyo2006_4.jpg
I know there's lots of detail unfinished, but nonetheless: any comments welcome!