Disconcerted by Matoogs

All of my life I’ve been introverted,
Quiet, reserved, it can be asserted,
But a moment ago, that was inverted,
With a few simple words that I just blurted.

“This year I’ll be cool” - I thought I’d assured it,
All freshly pressed pants and button-up shirted.
I said with a gusto, (not a bit disconcerted)
“A nerd up till now, but this year I skirt it!”

When the bell rang, to class we all herded,
The playground and hallways were quickly deserted,
We sat in our groups, the way we preferred it,
Up to this point: embarrassment averted

Our teacher for writing was Mr. McDurtit,
From his mouth questions were frequently spurted,
During his lecture, this one was worded:
“In my sentence, where’s my full stop asserted?”

A soon as I said it, I wished to reword it,
Outside of my head, it sounded perverted,
But there’s nothing to do, everyone heard it:
“I’ll tell you where, in your end it’s inserted!”

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