Do You Love Me by icepigs

I'm sad
And I can't be happy.
I always see your face
When I close my eyes.

Did you have to leave me?
Did you have to go?
I love you
Oh, so much.

I can't eat or sleep,
I am really not there.
I'm in my own
Little world.

Are you happy now?
Do you wear a smile?
I can't.
I forgot how to smile.

I pray you are happy
Where ever you are
I hate it here
Now you're not with me.

But I guess
I can make it
On my own.
I have to.

I always see
Your face
When I close my eyes.
Then I cry.

I do love you
I can't deny it
I just want to know
Do you love me?

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An attempt a free verse...

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  • Entered: 4/6/2011 7:46:48 PM
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