The Rivers by jago
2nd place entry in Bonus: Freestyle Poetry 2

Flows the ichor, flows the Styx:
Clotted blood and gore en-mixed.
Rancid roils this murky pitch,
Sombre, silent, sour.

Acheron, a wash of woe:
Anguished sorrow ebbs and flows.
Never happiness to know:
Fading by the hour.

Lamentations! Weep with us
On the river Cocytus.
Rapids spray, bring no solace:
Salted waters shower.

Raging pyre; Phlegethon
Flaming river rages on.
Churning, the conflagration:
Purge, and cleanse, and scour!

Lest the Lethe be forgot,
Quaff it, and remember naught.
Sweet nepenthe it is not --
Steals the memory's power.

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Author's Note:

The 5 rivers of Hades in Greek mythology.
I rewrote from memory, so any discrepancies from the original (which will be published only posthumously, if someone finds it in the basement) are my own fault.

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  • Sponsor: MsgtBob
  • Entered: 9/18/2011 7:39:19 PM
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  • Votes: 11
  • Score: 7.114
  • Views: 406
  • Comments: 7

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