Passed in the Men's Room by jago
10th place entry in Hilarious Headstones 4

There I sat; there, departed.
Meant to "go",
But plan was thwarted.

Ate not as I had intended
"Mild," I'd asked.
Soon life was ended!

Didn't think of my last curry:
Final meal!
Final worry!

Found myself upon the can,
Upset bowels,
Broken man.

Relief I sought there, only human.
That recipe had
Too much cumin!

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  • Entered: 10/9/2011 10:28:37 PM
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